alright the second pic is up and finally added her gemaphobic tendencies think that's all...

3rd pic added; Andshould note she's only aspiring to be a great tief; most of the deed she sas she's done are work of her mother; the previous sly cooper

And yet another fantastic image. I only wished that my pic searches were more productive as of late.

that is a very deep story for so much characters. i have you give you credit for that nice bio btw.

Mmm, I definatly have room for such talent in the play...hopefully you'll join up, hehe, The King in Yellow has his eyes upon you...

She is too cute...

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I think I'm in love

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Hmmm, very nice, perhaps sometime soon I will have to sample the short stuff *winks*

altered a few minor things

What did you change?

I'd like to offer you a very late welcome to campus and a bit of my opinion pertaining to your character. When creating a character I like to focus on consistency, and it is in my opinion that your character is not very consistent as far as her powers are concerned.

Your character is the 'Goddess Freya' incarnate, and I believe that your character's ability to see Aura's and her affinity for nature and music are well placed. However, if I'm reading correctly your character has control over all elements (earth, water, fire, wind, etc.) and I believe that is misplaced in your profile.

Also, telekinetics and paper manipulation also seem misplaced and overdone for an otherwise beautifully written character. I've yet to read your roleplays to see how you are using said powers, but you seem responsible. However your character seems a bit imbalanced for the theme you've selected. (Also from what I've read Freya enjoys Cats.)

Just offering my insight on the matter, and

thanks shai, I completely forgot I had the telekinetics in there still and the paper mastery, i never even bothered to use it heh

as for the elements, Freya was also a goddess associated with magic that's why i put the mana tap in there

and it's only michael's inner essence that's freya, the personality and interests are all her own save a few quirks

((Posted on behalf of roommate Lily whom is too lazy to turn her PC on at this time))

I rewrote her, fixed the grammar a great deal and did a bunch of other things to her, hoping to bring her back into use soon, she is in essence a new person so michael cooper is no longer a character, this is a new character pretty much with similar traits

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Dunno where to start... sounds like she's trying to be too many things at once.

oh yes, uhm whoops heh forgot to trim a few things that i had wanted to trim... absentmindedness strikes again, thanks madi