"Thanks you madam ~.o I'll give you a kiss if you let me out of this cage"
"Please don't let the slut out of her cage >.> She's a menace to us all..."
"Don't worry Cassie and Lust do that all the time."

And I'm certain the other 13 say hello as well =3

*Looks confused*

Hehe, um well... Nice to meet you all. Not quite sure if I should open any cage yet...

Umm may I suggest something about the height and size of what it seems all monster seem to focus on... what if NICE Lab when she came to the Campus injected her with the Mental Serum but it didn't do what it should of but morphed her physical body into that of the girl she thought she was / is / will be, ok i think i need to lay down your getting me Dizzy??? (Flop..)
Ahggh Oh, Sorry Im Komiko and welcome to the School. (Flop..)

Good God it aint Gaia is it? *shudders*

Well, Welcome back I suppose but I would like some clarification on some things personally. Her history is very vague concerning her alternate personalities so when you have the time I think it would be a good investment to delve a little bit deeper into them and it would help flesh out her personality a little bit more.

Obviously Alice Kingsley is the dominant personality so answer the basics for her. How did her disorder come about, when was it made apparent to her parents? How did they cope with the disorder, how did it affect her childhood and relationships with others.

And people, this is fantasy. I remember a character in dragon ball z who would change their outer apparences to reflect her personality, the only thing I'd suggest is make them a bit more subtle if you'd like to be more realistic. I'd suggest that her body "shuts down" whenever one of her other personalities begins to emerge thus avoiding bodily harm during the transformation- hair color, eyes, height, bust all those could be the result of a chemical imbalance working overtime in her body as long as its explained and justified.

How does she maintain control over all these girls? How often do they emerge? Is their knowledge shared or do they have to leave little notes for each other (Can't remember the name of the anime[Had something to do with a little pink stuffed dog and a kid with golden skates and a baseball bat] I'm thinking of but it was totally badass and the girl would leave messages on her answering machine to taunt her other shy personality after she'd been out all night getting nailed.) ?

Anyway, just offer a little clarification and you've got an A++++ character here. So whenever you get in trouble I can dock every one of your personalities for demerits >=D Very nice =)

<3Shai...

O.O Woah . . .long post XD.

No, it wasn't gaia. . . . *wonders which of the two would be worst* hmm. . . . . .Well, nevermind that. XD

You MUST tell me the anime of that headgirl >:3 Sounds interesting~

I think that anime with the kid in the gold skates was Paranoia Agent. I'm not quite sure though as I haven't seen it in quite a while.

Nice profile. I look to catch you around sometime.

Hm... interesting concept. Reminds me of 'Change 123'. And any number of modifications could have been made with the 'mental serum', it's entirely possible she could physically change with her personality shifts.

As a thought, her background is a little vague. And I wonder what 'infinite mana' really means... how and why and so on. But that's just a personal quirk of mine.

and yes, golden skates and a baseball bat is 'Paranoia Agent'.

basically 'infinite mana' is an unending amount of energy for her body to harness for various things, without a 'magical' outlet it manifests itself as physical energy, going to add that at some point to the character directly... once i finish writing the more complex version of it. how and why she has it? i'm still working on that

look in the middle for the new pic, first sexy pic I ever used!