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Author: | Ishtar_Rocha [ Sun Jan 02, 2011 7:13 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Akemi Ise |
Oh wow. Welcome to Shokushu!!! I hope you enjoy your time here! |
Author: | Kanoe [ Sun Jan 02, 2011 5:33 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Akemi Ise |
Seems you are aware of the inhibitors effects so looks good to me. Welcome to Shokushu! |
Author: | Madison [ Sun Jan 02, 2011 6:27 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Akemi Ise |
A couple things I notice... The body tempeture. An EMT friend of mine has told me that it's medically impossable to maintain such a high body tempeture. I'm considered to have a fairly high body tempeture at 99 degrees F, so I'm just curious about that. In yout background, you wrote down this: "On her 18th birthday as she was cleansing her body in a pure spring Akemi was visited by a messenger of Amaterasu who told her of the gift she was given. The gift of the Sun would allow her, with proper practice and training, to control some of the Sun's powers of light, heat, and its element of fire. The messenger also warned that she was to practice in secret until she could control her power so that her magical growth would not be influenced by the presence of others as she would need the protection of her powers someday. And so her life remained for several more years afterwards... It was on her 19th birthday....." You wrote "Several more years" when one year passed. |
Author: | Akemi Ise [ Sun Jan 02, 2011 6:32 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Akemi Ise |
Ah, I didn't know that. I will fix it right away. Do you mind if I use that temperature for her? As for the birthday I changed it around a bit when I was making her and I must have missed it, so thank you for catching it. EDIT: I think I fixed the issues with her profile. But if someone else catches another mistake I missed feel free to mention it. Also, I'm open for offers to RP so anyone can feel free to PM me if you're intrested. |
Author: | Madison [ Sun Jan 02, 2011 7:00 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Akemi Ise |
No problem. One of the things I'm here for. |
Author: | Therion [ Sun Jan 02, 2011 8:24 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Akemi Ise |
Welcome to Shokushu, I'm sure you'll be having fun in no time |
Author: | PiaM. [ Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:45 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Akemi Ise |
Welcome |
Author: | Ilixia [ Mon Jan 03, 2011 10:27 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Akemi Ise |
Welcome to Shokushu Akemi! It's always nice to see new people on the boards! ^.^ |
Author: | Aurora [ Sat Jan 08, 2011 4:34 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Akemi Ise |
Welcome to Shokushu. A Sun mage huh? Hmm.. Sun Mage and Snow Priestess -- that might be a pretty dangerous combination to have meet at some point. |
Author: | niellwyn [ Mon Jan 10, 2011 3:24 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Akemi Ise |
Welcome to Shokushu, and good job on your character. I do not think there have been very many priestesses with actual powers here on the boards. |
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