I hope I'm doing this right ^-^;

Student Bio/Profile
Name: Chelsey Kurosawa
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Place of Birth: West Virginia
Nationality: American
Hair Color: Chestnut brown
Eye Color: Hazel brown
Ethnicity: Caucasian
Skin Tone: Light
Pubic Hair: Yes, but very little
Distinguishing features: Freckles on her nose, rather short for her age
Height: 5'0”
Weight: 99lbs
Bust: 32 B
Waist: 32
Hips: 32
Background: Born on the eastern side of the Ohio River, Chelsey lived all of her life in Ohio attending both elementary and secondary school. Her life was fairly normal: no real boyfriends to speak of, went to school functions with friends, and developed an interest in teaching. She had excelled in her studies and had been granted the chance to attend one of Ohio's universities... that was until she received the letter of acceptance to an island school far from her home: Shokushu. Upon her acceptance into the mysterious school of Shokushu, she took it as an opportunity to learn more about the world and couldn't turn down the free ride they were offering her. Chelsey was thrilled to have gained the chance to go to school abroad, having packed her bags and arriving within a weeks time.
Psychological Profile: Normal
Personality: Energetic and loud at times, shy to make friends at first, nervous in new surroundings
Virgin? Yes
Piercing or Tattoos: Angel wing tattoo across her shoulders
Language: English
Likes: Reading, dancing, walking around barefoot outside
Activities: Drawing, cheerleading, reading, studying
Miscellaneous: N/A
Magic? No

Welcome to Shokushu Campus Chelsey, hope you enjoy your rape here… did I say Rape? I meant stay, if your need any help feel free to PM me, you find every one here are very friendly so again Welcome to Shokushu Campus Chelsey.

Welcome to Shokushu hope you enjoy your time here ^_^

Thanks a lot guys!

I just wasn't sure if I had filled everything out properly or not. Maybe someone could offer some suggestions? ^-^

And I hope to find a lot of fun roleplays here.

I'm sure the monsters and students will love you ^^

A bit bareboned but it works. Only problem I have is the omitted from records. I'm assuming that is because you are unsure what to give her for a last name and such. So unless you have an explanation in her history for not revealing basic information, I say just think of a place and a last name for her XD. Or you can just remove the omitted from records and just leave it as West Virginia.

Otherwise, welcome to Shokushu. ^.^

Kanoe pretty much nailed any issues that I can see.

Anyway, welcome to SHS. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.

Welcome aboard, I am sure your petite beauty will be popular (I love Haruhi, BTW ).

Welcome to Shokushu! I hope you enjoy your time here.

I made the edits that everyone spoke of and hopefully it looks okay now.

Anything else my (hopeful) new friends?

I think you are good to go. Enjoy your stay.

Welcome to Shokushu! I look forward to meeting you around the campus!

Thanks for the warm welcomes everyone! I hope I fit in around here!

Haha, we're all pretty friendly around here, some moreso than usual, so I don't think you'd have any problem fitting in!

Welcome aboard, hope to bump into you.