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| Author: | TehMorganator [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 11:03 am ] |
| Post subject: | Midnight Stars |
Student Bio/Profile Name: Midnight Stars Gender:Female Age: 18 Place of Birth: Unknown Nationality: British Hair Color: Sandy Yellow Eye Color: Blue normally, red when in psychotic rage, yellow in sociopathic calm. Skin Tone: Extremely Pale Distinguishing features: Carries large plushie sun with a smiley face called Sunny Jim around with her all the time, which she frequently talks to. Height:About 165cm Weight: 58KG Bust: N\A Background: At a young age had an... Incident at her first school. She has no memory of exactly what happened, but she regained consciousness surrounded by corpses of her classmates, which fractured her mind. However, she is usually calm and collected nowadays, with the occasional craziness seeping through. She is more than a little bit perverted, so joined an all girls school in the hope of spying on some 'action'. What she didn't count on was the tentacle monsters. Personality: Unstable. Virgin? Yes. Piercing or Tattoos: None Language: English, with the occasional use of other languages. Likes: Sunny Jim, Pastries and baked goods, cats. Dislikes:Tentacle monsters, young children, dogs. Activities: Fencing, bakery, scientific experimentation. Miscellaneous: Extremely paranoid, carries around some kind of method of defence most of the time. Magic? The cool eye thing I mentioned earlier, slight telekenisis that works on small objects. |
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| Author: | Forny [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 11:12 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
-blinks- Well... Uh... Hmm... I confess myself amused.  But yeah, you may want to rethink your character, since there's actually only one gender that's acceptable here.  Plus, I don't think you're gonna be able to keep the shank and the pepper spray. -shrugs- Other aspects are... questionable, but that's just me. I'll let either Madison or the mods have their say on those, but apart from that, you're gonna need to turn, uh, 'him' into a 'her'.
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| Author: | TehMorganator [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 1:15 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
Hey, the form to fill out includes a "gender" category, so I figured I'd give the tentacles monsters a little surprise. And by that I mean cruel joke. Anyway, small blades are pretty harmless against most tentacle monsters. Edit: Also, he's disguised as a she. But he's incognito, stealthy like a ninja. |
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| Author: | Kakumaoh [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 1:30 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
Despite the gender category, the rules explicitly state that all students must be female. There aren't going to be exceptions for anyone who's physically male. The knife and pepper spray will be taken away on the plane ride, regardless of how ineffective they might be against the average monster. On a few more nitpicky notes: feet are denoted with a single apostrophe and inches with two, not the other way round; 15 inches is much too narrow a waist and hips; you've listed height, waist, and hips in non-metric units, but weight in metric. (58 Kg is about 127-128 lbs). |
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| Author: | TehMorganator [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 1:34 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
Kakumaoh wrote: Despite the gender category, the rules explicitly state that all students must be female. There aren't going to be exceptions for anyone who's physically male. The knife and pepper spray will be taken away on the plane ride, regardless of how ineffective they might be against the average monster. On a few more nitpicky notes: feet are denoted with a single apostrophe and inches with two, not the other way round; 15 inches is much too narrow a waist and hips; you've listed height, waist, and hips in non-metric units, but weight in metric. (58 Kg is about 127-128 lbs). Oh. Sorry about that. I'll amend all that stuff. You have to excuse me, I'm used to metric. |
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| Author: | Forny [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 1:35 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
Don't get me wrong, I'm just offering advice. Gender might be on the profile but rules say if you're a student, you're a chick, incognito or no. -shrugs- Plus, we've had ninja students. They didn't get away with being incognito, if you get my drift. Small blades are still weapons, though, even if they won't do much against monsters. We've had way less effective weapons taken off as well, rules and all. Keep the character the way it is, if you wanna. No skin off my back. But either ways, mods or Madison will say the same thing, and in more forceful terms. 
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| Author: | TehMorganator [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 1:52 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
Right fixed it. He is now a she, is entirely metric, and has no specific self-defence. |
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| Author: | Aegir 2 [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 3:18 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
Welcome to the island. |
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| Author: | Madison [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 10:18 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
Well, the only real defense she'd be able to carry at all times would be her fists, as any cutlery taken would end up getting taken back somehow during the night... Also I note a few "Him"s and "he"s still, just so you're aware.. |
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| Author: | Vikky [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 10:27 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
Of course, she'll still be able to pick up whatever she might possibly find at school as temporary defense. I kinda like the idea that she had her defensive items taken away from her at the plane, so now she could be searching for roughly anything to defend herself. Hmmm... I wonder, how much can one find in one's own house that it is possible to defend oneself with...? Also, since Madison didn't openly say you were denied, it means you've been officially accepted~ She's kind of unclear like that, but she's said in the past what she doesn't mention is acceptable in the thread she posts in, so~ Welcome to the school~ I look forward to seeing you attempt using something strange to defend yourself~ |
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| Author: | TehMorganator [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 10:28 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
Yay! I can start! |
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| Author: | Madison [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 10:34 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
Well, she won't always find something. |
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| Author: | TehMorganator [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 10:43 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
Madison wrote: Well, she won't always find something. Damn, that was ominous and foreboding. |
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| Author: | Vikky [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 10:52 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
Don't mind her. She's the power, and she has to maintain order around here. And we rebellious lower life-forms do everything in our power to get away with exactly what we want. Soooooo... Do your best to find random means of defense~ |
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| Author: | TehMorganator [ Sat Feb 16, 2013 11:00 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Midnight Stars |
Vikky wrote: Don't mind her. She's the power, and she has to maintain order around here. And we rebellious lower life-forms do everything in our power to get away with exactly what we want. Soooooo... Do your best to find random means of defense~ I'm sure the basement'll be full of rusty shanks that I can appropriate, I'll go investigate there! :3 |
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