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Author: | Frozenflame [ Sun Jan 17, 2016 1:23 am ] |
Post subject: | Eda Perali [WIP] |
Name: Eda Perali Gender: Female Age: 18 Place of Birth: Orléans, France Nationality: French Hair: Brunette Eye Color: Brown Skin Tone: Milky white Pubic Hair: Trimmed Distinguishing features: small birthmark on her left shoulder Height: 5'3" Weight: 120 Ibs Background: Though past experiences often influence how an individual turns out, there still remains that individuals take on certain characteristics from birth - with no key event triggering their motivations. This simply applies to Eda Perali, who has lived a very normal life in Orléans. She had grown up in a relatively comfortable apartment with her parents and was the eldest of three (one younger sister and brother). Having grown up in such a historically rich city, Eda had taken pride in being French. Her entire world consisted of the peoples she would run into within the city, as well as bonds she made with peoples just north of her in Paris. To friends, family, and acquaintances, Eda was labeled as the ideal girl which many boys would regret not asking out. The brunette was very smart academically, though she wasn't too athletic. She loves cooking and everything adorable. Although those close to her have noticed that Eda's innocence comes in the form of some phrases she says, which can be taken in different ways... Virgin? Yes Orientation: Straight, for now. Piercing or Tattoos: None Language: French, english Likes: Feeling superior to others, being important in affairs Activities: Leadership roles, reading, relaxing outside, cooking, collecting stuffed animals Miscellaneous: While Eda herself has been a very sweet girl, arriving at Shokushu would introduce some characteristics to Eda that even she was unaware of. Back in France, practically everyone was a Frenchman. Yet as Eda goes to Shokushu, she immediately feels an air of superiority to other girls despite her middle class upbringing. The brunette does not express her pride outright, and instead expresses it through her actions. She will soon develop the urge to dominate and repress others. Yet, this does not mean her kindness is a facade. In fact, Eda is both kind and abusive. She is sweet and evil... She is sour, yet sweet. |
Author: | Frozenflame [ Fri Mar 24, 2017 1:17 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Eda Perali [WIP] |
Hi all, Here's the first draft of Eda. I'm not too sure what's missing from her, or if I'm just holding her up to Vanessa/Cece standards which already have had time to develop as characters. I tried to do something different and have Eda start off initially as a completely kind girl who develops into that mix of kind yet evil. Let me know what you think! Feedback is always welcome! |
Author: | Essence [ Fri Mar 24, 2017 6:24 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Eda Perali [WIP] |
Quite interesting to say the least. |
Author: | niellwyn [ Thu Jun 01, 2017 5:29 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Eda Perali [WIP] |
I see no problems at first glance. You definitely went above and beyond with pictures, and her profile does the job. You may want to add an entry about kinks or sexual oddities (it gives the monsters an idea about how to RP with you), but that's entirely optional. |
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