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Sakara the escaped morrel slave
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Author:  habilon [ Thu May 21, 2009 2:10 am ]
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two sides? if their are any problems I am prepared to make slight changes
Author:  Stormbringer [ Thu May 21, 2009 3:15 pm ]
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Given the change in weight etc a transformation takes place but there's no indication why, how or when.
Author:  habilon [ Thu May 21, 2009 8:31 pm ]
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the morrel is a fantasy creature in my novel, I am only using its human form here, but put the discription of the morrel beast form here to give some back ground and share my creation... if it is a problem I will fix it
Author:  Anna Lenox [ Fri May 22, 2009 3:07 am ]
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habilon wrote:
the morrel is a fantasy creature in my novel, I am only using its human form here, but put the discription of the morrel beast form here to give some back ground and share my creation... if it is a problem I will fix it


If she's always going to look like a human, why not just make her a human?
Author:  habilon [ Fri May 22, 2009 4:17 am ]
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creativity... I just thought it would be nice, I will change it so there is less confusion... I will do so soon
Author:  habilon [ Sat Aug 14, 2010 4:27 pm ]
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notice

i have made major changes to saky now, including taking away the more animal like form.

the changes are brought about due to changes i made in the actualy species for my novels and rps

(and in acordance to the fact that i have to admit that the original profile was a bit silly and unrealistic... i am currently still working on making the morrel species more realistic, as a bit of irony, my original morrel was able to walk on water, the new morrel is now unable to even swim due to the fact that the fur makes it almost impossible for a morrel to create drag in water allowing them to swim)

if anyone sees something that could use some work please do tell me, i am more open to constructive critisism then i was when i first made this profile
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