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 Some poetry I have wrote up... 
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Seperation
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Take no chance on me
I just want to feel free
I will make it known
And this time I will be shown

In seperation
I will make it on my own

So you say I won't make it
But I will prove you wrong
And you will not stand in my way
Or you'll be singing a sad song

In seperation
Only time will tell

And I must remain strong
In my seperation

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Probably my best poem I ever wrote.

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You Can't Tame Me
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I'm an animal
I'm wild at heart
It's time to be practical
This is only the start

You can't tame me
I just want to feel free

I don't have fur
But I might bite
And I must concur
Without so much a fight

You can't tame me
I will show you, baby

I'm superhuman
And you can't tame me!

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Another decent one that I thought I'd share with you all.

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Don't Push The Limit
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I got to warn you
I hope to make this very clear
Because I need to get through
It's just some simple advice, dear

Don't push the limit
It's not what that matters
It's what you say or do

Times are changing
Attitudes are shifting
The world is evolving
And we seem to be merging

Don't push the limit
No matter what I say
This is not the time to play

Just don't push the limit
And everything will be just fine!

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And my other favorite one.

These three poems that I wrote most recently are probably the three I consider my best works. I've adapted to a different style of how I come up with them. And as you can tell... I do employ some rhymes in each of 'em. But it works out nevertheless.


Sun Jul 01, 2007 12:39 am
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Very sweet. These have a song-like quality to them, you know...


Sun Jul 01, 2007 2:38 am
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The Count Alucard wrote:
Very sweet. These have a song-like quality to them, you know...


Heh, thanks.

My inspiration comes from almost *ANYTHING* at all. Songs, influences from certain moods, etc. Most of the time I usually write poetry about emotions or how I feel *AT THE MOMENT*. So... it depends.

Would you be surprised that I can usually whip up a poem in less than a few seconds? Some people would be surprised at how quick I can come up with a poem. And then suddenly... I'd write up 2 more in just a matter of seconds back to back. It's pretty crazy. :)


Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:08 am
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Sometime's it's like that when I draw. I'll just look at something right, and then bam! I've got a nice sketch of it. Of course, for me, this is pretty rare, but it still happens...


Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:13 am
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The Count Alucard wrote:
Sometime's it's like that when I draw. I'll just look at something right, and then bam! I've got a nice sketch of it. Of course, for me, this is pretty rare, but it still happens...


Heh.

I almost got inspired to write up a new poem just abit ago. And I was about to do it. Then I felt another compulsion to write up some descriptions. So I decided to come up with some written descriptions for my profile/bio(link should now be in signature, I hope).

Let's just say... even I am left blinking and thinking "What? I came up with that?"

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Neglected And Rejected
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The tides are turning
The flames were burning
The time we spent together
Is now lost forever

I feel neglected
I feel my heart ripped from my chest
I feel rejected
Our love we once had is now put to rest

I now feel myself crumble
My mind is lost in a jumble
Now that our love is gone
I wonder how could it go wrong

I feel neglected
I can no longer stand on my own feet
I feel rejected
I now feel beat

I'm neglected and rejected!

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Latest poem I wrote up and put up on DevArt. It's actually inspired by Britney Spear's song titled "Guilty".


Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:15 am
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Not really *brand new* poetry... but a few more I'd like to share with you guys.

Free Me
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You've got to understand
How I've truly felt
It's not a huge demand
To know how much damage has been dealt

You got to free me
Please just let me go

No matter the consequences
I am ready to stand
This is not a time for past tenses
I no longer need a helping hand

You got to free me
I will find a way out

And I ain't gonna shout
So please just free me!

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This is more along the lines when I felt sad and lonely. And I was just sort of lost.

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Destiny
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I'm filled with a new hope
I've been touched by the light
I feel as if I can cope
Now I feel as if I don't need to fight

Is it destiny?
That has set me free

I can finally understand
As I continue to push foward
And without making any more demands
That I have made it through

Is it destiny?
I just want to spread my wings

And soar into the sky
It must be destiny!

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A more positive poem that sorta counters "Free Me".

So what do you think?


Mon Jul 09, 2007 12:13 pm
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Reality
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I used to live in a dream
But I finally broke free
It wasn't what it seemed
Now I can finally be me

This is reality
No longer trapped by fantasy

The light touches my skin
My heart fills with hope
And I know where to begin
As now I can cope

And it becomes reality
And I can finally see

That this is my destiny
And this is reality!

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100% "awesome". Inspired by Goldenscan's "Only With You" and basically any techno/trance tune ever released.

Basically... being Shinigami is now my *reality*. So Shin is now "me". :D

Leave a comment if you want. :)


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Cool.


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Evolution
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Untapped energy courses through me
An inner fire consumes my body
Soon the world will see something new
And life will be seen from a different point of view

We are going through an evolution
It is a solution to a brand new day

My body grows
As my heart becomes weak
As my personality shows
No time for the timid or meek

We are going through an evolution
A definite change is coming

No use in hiding
From the coming evolution.

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A bit more word usage than most of my previous efforts. Still not 100% my greatest work. But... ah well.

I'm a harsh critic when it comes to my abilities in coming up with *good* poetry. I always chastise myself and know when my poem is crap. And I always "lecture" myself.

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You Don't Own Me
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I'm breaking through
Not gonna waste my time
I will show you
It'll be considered a crime

You don't own me
So leave me be

Love means nothing
When nothing is there
So here is something
Because I don't really care

You don't own me
I will be free

You ain't gonna be stopping me
And you don't own me.

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This poem here is about "defiance".

Like how a person feels trapped and is fighting back against a lover who is trying to dominate every aspect of his/her life. It was weird, sudden inspiration. And I just felt like writing up something that had a "defiant" streak to it.


So... comment on it and whathaveyou.


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Transformation
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Changes from within
I don't know where to begin
My form begins to shift
My body ripples through a cold drift

I'm going through a transformation
And I don't know how to deal
Is this really happening
Is this even real

Soon my body is on fire
As I'm swept up in burning heat
My eyes glint with a hint of desire
And soon I feel complete

I'm going through a transformation
I can't believe what is happening to me
My body is growing
My heart in my chest is showing

I'm going through a transformation
And I'm overwhelmed by the sensation.

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Meh...

Just a real quick poem I thought up of doing. First I thought of doing a poem called "Pray For Me". But backed out right before I can do up any of the first rhymes. So I decided to come up with this. And I'm quite pleased with the overall outcome of it. :)


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Destination
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Walking along the road
I see a light
Peircing through the darkness
With my approach it gets bright

It seems I've reached my destination
I'm overwhelmed by a weird sensation

I'm seeing things from a different point of view
Yet I don't seem to even have a clue
I keep wondering if this is the right way
And soon night turns into day

It seems I've reached my destination
I've had a realization

About our crazy nation
It seems I've reached my destination.
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Abit more word usage... just going back to trying different styles in my poetry writing. I tend to alternate and try new stuff for new poems and whatnot.

So what do you think?


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Me, Myself, and I
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Individualistic
You percieve me how you see fit
Surrealistic
This is the point I'm trying to get across

Me, myself and I
I'm just a normal guy
Me, myself and I
I am trying to reach the sky

I have issues
And not with the world
But I'll not trouble you
I'm just trying to make it through

Me, myself and I
No matter how hard I try
Me, myself and I
I just want to cry

People wonder why I'm sad
It looks like I have to make a stand
I try my best to be glad
So please don't make this look like a big demand

Me, myself and I
I just want to be free
Me, myself and I
I hope you can understand

Me, myself and I.

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Sometimes...

I'd like to express myself in my poetry. So here is something that describes me to the world. Read it and weep... or... not.


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Imagination
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Expanding my horizons
As I think of something great
Something your mind is set on
You'll just have to wait

Welcome to my imagination
Where everything is my creation
And it's all from my mind
A place to unwind

Take a flight
As you soar upon a pair of wings
Soon you'll see some wondrous sights
And soon you'll encounter many things

Welcome to my imagination
You are overcome by a wild sensation
Your heart pounds in your chest
And you can't stop for a rest

As you take a tour of my imagination!

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100% original poem.

Fresh, original, spontaneous piece of work by me. And it works pretty decently. The rhymes at the beginning verses are abit peculiar. But otherwise it works pretty well.

So enjoy it and comment if you like.


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Another self-expression poem...

You Don't Know Me
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Sometimes some things are better left unsaid
And at other times some things are better left undone
Maybe we gone a little little too far
Now we are caught in a trap

You don't know me
As well as you thought

Assumptions have been made
And this time you've played
And all I can really do
Is struggle to make it through

You don't know me
So now you should be taught

Sometimes I just wish I could be free
Because you don't know me.
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I thought about making this longer and more of a song. But I decided to keep it short, sweet, and to the point. And using my other poetry style, as well.

So what do you think? Comments are appreciated!


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Sounds almost like you're trying to tell someone in specific... :)

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