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Author: | Shinigami [ Sun Jul 01, 2007 12:39 am ] |
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Seperation --- Take no chance on me I just want to feel free I will make it known And this time I will be shown In seperation I will make it on my own So you say I won't make it But I will prove you wrong And you will not stand in my way Or you'll be singing a sad song In seperation Only time will tell And I must remain strong In my seperation --- Probably my best poem I ever wrote. --- You Can't Tame Me --- I'm an animal I'm wild at heart It's time to be practical This is only the start You can't tame me I just want to feel free I don't have fur But I might bite And I must concur Without so much a fight You can't tame me I will show you, baby I'm superhuman And you can't tame me! --- Another decent one that I thought I'd share with you all. --- Don't Push The Limit --- I got to warn you I hope to make this very clear Because I need to get through It's just some simple advice, dear Don't push the limit It's not what that matters It's what you say or do Times are changing Attitudes are shifting The world is evolving And we seem to be merging Don't push the limit No matter what I say This is not the time to play Just don't push the limit And everything will be just fine! --- And my other favorite one. These three poems that I wrote most recently are probably the three I consider my best works. I've adapted to a different style of how I come up with them. And as you can tell... I do employ some rhymes in each of 'em. But it works out nevertheless. |
Author: | The Count Alucard [ Sun Jul 01, 2007 2:38 am ] |
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Very sweet. These have a song-like quality to them, you know... |
Author: | Shinigami [ Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:08 am ] |
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The Count Alucard wrote: Very sweet. These have a song-like quality to them, you know... Heh, thanks. My inspiration comes from almost *ANYTHING* at all. Songs, influences from certain moods, etc. Most of the time I usually write poetry about emotions or how I feel *AT THE MOMENT*. So... it depends. Would you be surprised that I can usually whip up a poem in less than a few seconds? Some people would be surprised at how quick I can come up with a poem. And then suddenly... I'd write up 2 more in just a matter of seconds back to back. It's pretty crazy. |
Author: | The Count Alucard [ Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:13 am ] |
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Sometime's it's like that when I draw. I'll just look at something right, and then bam! I've got a nice sketch of it. Of course, for me, this is pretty rare, but it still happens... |
Author: | Shinigami [ Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:15 am ] |
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The Count Alucard wrote: Sometime's it's like that when I draw. I'll just look at something right, and then bam! I've got a nice sketch of it. Of course, for me, this is pretty rare, but it still happens... Heh. I almost got inspired to write up a new poem just abit ago. And I was about to do it. Then I felt another compulsion to write up some descriptions. So I decided to come up with some written descriptions for my profile/bio(link should now be in signature, I hope). Let's just say... even I am left blinking and thinking "What? I came up with that?" --- Neglected And Rejected --- The tides are turning The flames were burning The time we spent together Is now lost forever I feel neglected I feel my heart ripped from my chest I feel rejected Our love we once had is now put to rest I now feel myself crumble My mind is lost in a jumble Now that our love is gone I wonder how could it go wrong I feel neglected I can no longer stand on my own feet I feel rejected I now feel beat I'm neglected and rejected! --- Latest poem I wrote up and put up on DevArt. It's actually inspired by Britney Spear's song titled "Guilty". |
Author: | Shinigami [ Mon Jul 09, 2007 12:13 pm ] |
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Not really *brand new* poetry... but a few more I'd like to share with you guys. Free Me --- You've got to understand How I've truly felt It's not a huge demand To know how much damage has been dealt You got to free me Please just let me go No matter the consequences I am ready to stand This is not a time for past tenses I no longer need a helping hand You got to free me I will find a way out And I ain't gonna shout So please just free me! --- This is more along the lines when I felt sad and lonely. And I was just sort of lost. --- Destiny --- I'm filled with a new hope I've been touched by the light I feel as if I can cope Now I feel as if I don't need to fight Is it destiny? That has set me free I can finally understand As I continue to push foward And without making any more demands That I have made it through Is it destiny? I just want to spread my wings And soar into the sky It must be destiny! --- A more positive poem that sorta counters "Free Me". So what do you think? |
Author: | Shinigami [ Mon Jul 09, 2007 7:11 pm ] |
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Reality --- I used to live in a dream But I finally broke free It wasn't what it seemed Now I can finally be me This is reality No longer trapped by fantasy The light touches my skin My heart fills with hope And I know where to begin As now I can cope And it becomes reality And I can finally see That this is my destiny And this is reality! --- 100% "awesome". Inspired by Goldenscan's "Only With You" and basically any techno/trance tune ever released. Basically... being Shinigami is now my *reality*. So Shin is now "me". Leave a comment if you want. |
Author: | The Count Alucard [ Mon Jul 09, 2007 7:18 pm ] |
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Cool. |
Author: | Shinigami [ Tue Jul 10, 2007 1:29 pm ] |
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Evolution --- Untapped energy courses through me An inner fire consumes my body Soon the world will see something new And life will be seen from a different point of view We are going through an evolution It is a solution to a brand new day My body grows As my heart becomes weak As my personality shows No time for the timid or meek We are going through an evolution A definite change is coming No use in hiding From the coming evolution. --- A bit more word usage than most of my previous efforts. Still not 100% my greatest work. But... ah well. I'm a harsh critic when it comes to my abilities in coming up with *good* poetry. I always chastise myself and know when my poem is crap. And I always "lecture" myself. --- You Don't Own Me --- I'm breaking through Not gonna waste my time I will show you It'll be considered a crime You don't own me So leave me be Love means nothing When nothing is there So here is something Because I don't really care You don't own me I will be free You ain't gonna be stopping me And you don't own me. --- This poem here is about "defiance". Like how a person feels trapped and is fighting back against a lover who is trying to dominate every aspect of his/her life. It was weird, sudden inspiration. And I just felt like writing up something that had a "defiant" streak to it. So... comment on it and whathaveyou. |
Author: | Terasmus [ Sat Jul 14, 2007 12:37 pm ] |
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Transformation --- Changes from within I don't know where to begin My form begins to shift My body ripples through a cold drift I'm going through a transformation And I don't know how to deal Is this really happening Is this even real Soon my body is on fire As I'm swept up in burning heat My eyes glint with a hint of desire And soon I feel complete I'm going through a transformation I can't believe what is happening to me My body is growing My heart in my chest is showing I'm going through a transformation And I'm overwhelmed by the sensation. --- Meh... Just a real quick poem I thought up of doing. First I thought of doing a poem called "Pray For Me". But backed out right before I can do up any of the first rhymes. So I decided to come up with this. And I'm quite pleased with the overall outcome of it. |
Author: | Terasmus [ Sun Jul 15, 2007 1:24 pm ] |
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Destination --- Walking along the road I see a light Peircing through the darkness With my approach it gets bright It seems I've reached my destination I'm overwhelmed by a weird sensation I'm seeing things from a different point of view Yet I don't seem to even have a clue I keep wondering if this is the right way And soon night turns into day It seems I've reached my destination I've had a realization About our crazy nation It seems I've reached my destination. --- Abit more word usage... just going back to trying different styles in my poetry writing. I tend to alternate and try new stuff for new poems and whatnot. So what do you think? |
Author: | Terasmus [ Sun Jul 15, 2007 5:29 pm ] |
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Me, Myself, and I --- Individualistic You percieve me how you see fit Surrealistic This is the point I'm trying to get across Me, myself and I I'm just a normal guy Me, myself and I I am trying to reach the sky I have issues And not with the world But I'll not trouble you I'm just trying to make it through Me, myself and I No matter how hard I try Me, myself and I I just want to cry People wonder why I'm sad It looks like I have to make a stand I try my best to be glad So please don't make this look like a big demand Me, myself and I I just want to be free Me, myself and I I hope you can understand Me, myself and I. --- Sometimes... I'd like to express myself in my poetry. So here is something that describes me to the world. Read it and weep... or... not. |
Author: | Terasmus [ Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:53 am ] |
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Imagination --- Expanding my horizons As I think of something great Something your mind is set on You'll just have to wait Welcome to my imagination Where everything is my creation And it's all from my mind A place to unwind Take a flight As you soar upon a pair of wings Soon you'll see some wondrous sights And soon you'll encounter many things Welcome to my imagination You are overcome by a wild sensation Your heart pounds in your chest And you can't stop for a rest As you take a tour of my imagination! --- 100% original poem. Fresh, original, spontaneous piece of work by me. And it works pretty decently. The rhymes at the beginning verses are abit peculiar. But otherwise it works pretty well. So enjoy it and comment if you like. |
Author: | Terasmus [ Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:37 am ] |
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Another self-expression poem... You Don't Know Me --- Sometimes some things are better left unsaid And at other times some things are better left undone Maybe we gone a little little too far Now we are caught in a trap You don't know me As well as you thought Assumptions have been made And this time you've played And all I can really do Is struggle to make it through You don't know me So now you should be taught Sometimes I just wish I could be free Because you don't know me. --- I thought about making this longer and more of a song. But I decided to keep it short, sweet, and to the point. And using my other poetry style, as well. So what do you think? Comments are appreciated! |
Author: | The Count Alucard [ Tue Jul 17, 2007 4:08 am ] |
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Sounds almost like you're trying to tell someone in specific... |
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