I have made up my mind that I will be writing a short story every week and posting it here for people to read and comment.

the stories all revolve around my monster hunter samora (or sam for short), she goes around fighting and killin creatures... or at least that is what she says^^... in reality she is raped by every monster she hunts, and only sometime manages to kill them.

So once every week on monday I will post the next short story, then throughout the week and weekend I will allow people to post comments and advice (which is why I am doing this... to get better at writing). I will also be taking requests for how samora gets raped, or by whom... but bear in mind that if you don't state the monster is not to die... he probably will.

next week I will post samora's bio on here... do not post before I do this (I may do it earlier) and then the first story.

hope to get good advice and comments from this.

Name: Samora
Gender: female
Age: 23
Place of Birth: restricted
Nationality: restricted
Hair Color: jet black
Eye Color: emerald green
Ethnicity: restricted
Skin Tone: pale
Pubic Hair: no
Distinguishing features: a large tattoo on her back, looks like a flaming orb
Height: 5' 8"
Weight: 73 kg
Bust: 35 C
Waist: 32cm diameter
Hips: 37cm

Background: Samora's past is not recorded well...but at a young age her father was killed and her mother raped to death by a monster... ever since she has wanted revenge on that monster, and so took up hunting rape monsters, always looking for the one that killed her parents. thanks to her practices shehas lostthe ability to give birth... but won't tell how.

Psychological Profile: Samora has a strange habit of closing her eyes when snipping,relying on her scences to feel her target... this leads to her being raped

Personality: samora is a tough gal when she is fighting, but soft too those she cares about. She loves to fight and is hard to take down, but when she is taken down... she struggles.

Virgin: no

Piercing or Tattoos: yes...the tattoo on her back

Language: seems to speak everything

Likes: fighting,killing rape monsters

Activities: hunting rape monsters

(may update this more later)

I want her to meet the EXile Please ?
I love the background as well !

oh I was thinking of making exile the killer of her parents...that ok with you?

Works for me .

k ty^^

Ready when you are ,samora ?

I'm not posting the first story till nex week^^

Cool !

I'll tell you one thing though... the creature she first faces is an arachnid type^^.... but I think I need to work on the story.... but I won't and will see what others think on monday^^

Cool looking forward to it .

hopefuly I can learn what I do wrong and work on my weakpoints^^

I know you will !
I have faith in you ,Halibon .

thank you^^... anyways I am almost finished writing it out^^

Great !