however since this is my first one tobe posted I don't think it will be all that great
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| Author: | habilon [ Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:47 pm ] |
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however since this is my first one tobe posted I don't think it will be all that great
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| Author: | Princedarkstorm [ Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:54 pm ] |
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I have faith in you . Just relax and let the creative flow thru you when you do write ok ? |
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| Author: | habilon [ Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:07 pm ] |
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ok... ty... well the monster I am using ishard for me to use... never used its kind before |
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| Author: | Princedarkstorm [ Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:10 pm ] |
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You can do . I have faith in you . Besides I am a rext newbie but I make a great sounding board . |
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| Author: | The Count Alucard [ Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:17 pm ] |
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It does sound fairly interesting, deary... I bet you'll do just fine. 
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| Author: | habilon [ Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:29 pm ] |
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ty you guys for that my confidence had gone up a bit^^ |
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| Author: | Princedarkstorm [ Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:32 pm ] |
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Anytime . |
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| Author: | habilon [ Sun Feb 22, 2009 11:07 pm ] |
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well I have finished the first story and will be posting it tommorow |
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| Author: | habilon [ Mon Feb 23, 2009 2:28 pm ] |
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(well here is my first story, the spider in a school) Samora looked around the school, she had been called there because she had heard reports of a monster that had taken up residence here, a class d monster. The report said that the creature had a class off girls, their bodies where found hanging from trees, wrapped in cocoons. Since it was only a class d monster she had left HQ without her armor, and brought only her modified Remington 1100, with 18 gauge shots, extra storage, and specialized nozzle for a more pinpoint spray of shots, she amply named it the ‘monster buster’. Samora walked down a corridor, cob webs covered the hallway making thin delicate walls. “Dam it, and arachnid type.” Samora mutters as she pushes the cobweb aside. As Samora walks forward she hears a clicking sound. Samora points her monster buster down the hall where the clicking had come from. As she goes down she finds a pair of doors. Samora was about to open them when she got tackled and fell to the ground, on her was a giant spider, about the size of a small child. The spider looked like a normal spider, but it had a large cock attached to its abdomen. Samora hits the spider with the side of her gun, sending it to the side. “Must be a nest of these spider things hiding around here.” Samora says to herself as she squishes the spider with her foot, causing a sticky white substance to spray out. Samora continues down the hall where the spider had tackled her. It ended in a set of metal doors. Samora gently pushed the doors open and went inside; the room was dark, only a little light came in between a mass of webs on the windows. That is when Samora heard it, the clicking sound again, but this time it came from all around her. Curious Samora found the light switch and turned it on. Samora barely had time to react as she was attacked by a larger spider, and many smaller ones. The large spider was about the sixe of a grown man. The spider bit Samora, injecting something into her left breast, Samora realized it was a numbing agent as she lost feeling in that area, desperately Samora lifted her gun and pulled the trigger. The blast resulted in the wall behind the spider to be covered in white goo, and the spider to have a gaping hole in its large abdomen. The spider recoiled, letting out a large shrieking noise as it fell to the ground screaming. Samora shot it again, and proceeded to squish nearby spider with a disgusted look on her face. Feeling drowsy, Samora walked back the way she had come, thinking that she had finished the job and could go home…. But as she rounded the corner she found out just how wrong she was. There in front of her was a human/spider hybrid; it had the body of a human, as well as legs and arms, and large cock, and it also had eight spider legs protruding out of its shoulders, and a large spider abdomen on its ass. “Aw great!” Samora groans, trying to lift her gun, but her arm just lays limp “Great, now I can’t use my arm.” she growl as she is tackled by another human sized spider. Samora lies on the ground dazed as the spider gets off her, and the human/spider (I’ll refer to it as the ‘spiman’)walks to her and lower itself. The Spiman rips her clothing off and grabs her breasts, starting to play with them, as its cock starts to rub up against her pussy. The Spiman growls and nibbles on Samora's nipples, which erect against her will, its cock starts to probe her. Around her more spiders gather, their cocks all erect, but they stay back as the Spiman growls, he would be the first to enjoy this morsel. The Spiman's abdomen lowers itself, another cock on its end, to Samara’s ass, and both begin to fuck Samora in her puss and ass. The Spiman continues to fuck Samora for hours, every once in a while it releases sticky white cream onto her body, and then enters again. On the fifth time of doing this the Spiman does not exit, and pours its contents into Samora’s pussy and ass, causing them to overflow and have the white cream drip out onto the floor. All the while Samora has been unable to move or make a sound thanks to the numbing poison, but now there is a twitch in her fingers. The Spiman lets go of Samora and stands back as the surrounding spider’s crowd in to have their turn. One by one they fuck Samora, one in each hole, and spray their cream all over her. After what must have been eight hour the gang rape stops. The Spiman walks over to Samora, picking her up by the waist. Its abdomen lifts up and sprays a silk like sting onto her; the string grabs hold of her feet. The Spiman begins to spin her, wrapping her in the silk, like a spider does to its meals. As the spider gets half way down wrapping Samora up she finds she can now move her hand. Samora sees her gun on the ground below her. She grabs it and strains to lift herself up and point the gun at the Spiman. “Eat shot bitch!” she growls pulling the trigger. (I have purposely left it as an open ending as an experiment, do tell what you think about the experiment and the story, but if you are going to criticize please, please make it constructive) |
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| Author: | Kane [ Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:07 am ] |
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nice simple and to the point I'm also an archniphobic so you get ponits there |
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| Author: | habilon [ Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:09 am ] |
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thank you^^ |
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| Author: | habilon [ Tue Mar 03, 2009 5:56 am ] |
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I am sorry about this week, I have just been able to break thrue my writers block on one of my novels and have been spending time working on it, so will not be able to work on these short stories for a while |
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