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 Character Theme Poem - Terasmus 
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Sudden, crazy, weird inspiration to write a poem. So here it is.

Feeding Your Inner Indulgence
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I am in need
To quell a hunger
That has been lying dormant
Within me

It is the answer
to sate the fire
That dwells deep
This burning desire

I am hungry
There is no doubt about it
I don't know
How long I can go on

Because I want to do this one special thing
If you know what I mean
You may hate it
But I don't care

Because I found my answer
When i'm feeding your inner indulgence

This is the answer
Because I'm feeding your inner indulgence.

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A wee bit different than all my other poems. But that's what I intended for it to be. *DIFFERENT*!


Wed Jul 11, 2007 4:02 am
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Reminds me of Tool.

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Wed Jul 11, 2007 4:14 am
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Thanks.

I don't really know what Tool sounds like. But I think I'll find out soon from "MySpace". I bet they are pretty good, eh?

Anyway... I did theme this from a quote which is now my "copyright/signature" quote for Terasmus. And... yes. :D I'm very happy with the results of this poem. Even though it's more experimental.


Wed Jul 11, 2007 11:09 am
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Wait a sec... you've never heard a Tool song?!?

How is that possible?

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Thu Jul 19, 2007 2:37 pm
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No.

I don't listen to alot of other popular groups. I may eventually get around to doing so, however. And... I don't know. I am actually interested in it. Maybe it'll help inspire me to write up more poetry.


Thu Jul 19, 2007 2:46 pm
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If you like tool, go for Incubus, Soundgarden, and Audioslave. My oh My Chris Cornell could seduce me with his voice. *drools*

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