Please help me make a better monster. This is my first attempt and I'm not sure how I did. This is super long. So thank you to whoever reads it all the way through. And yes, telling me what I can cut out is useful criticism.

Name: Gambo (Quixxal Gambolzot) (ADZ-1A033045) (Area Defense Zombie)
A.K.A. Maddy
Race: Gorian
Type: Zombie
Place of Birth: Xel on Malekort, a planet quite far from here, both in space and time.
Sex: Male
Nationality: N/A
Age: N/A (He was 35 when he died. They reanimated him 250 years ago. You decide.)
Height: 6' 5"
Weight: 175
Eye Color: Grey (when present)
Skin Color: ghastly pale
Skin Texture: rotting
Hair? usually missing clumps, sometimes completely bald.
Hair Color: varies (blond/red/black)
Hair Length: Varies from crew cut to shoulder length
Body Build: sickly thin, decaying
Tail? No
Tentacles? Sometimes (Has magics that can create them. Till now, rarely used.)
Number of Tentacles: varies
Wings? No (ditto magic)
Cock Size: Varies. Always impressive. And always seems frighteningly too large for victim. Magics actually cause it to be the largest size his victim can tolerate.
# of Cocks: 1 or 2 (or more via magic.)

Fighting Style: Trap & Chase - Gambo is programmed to lie in wait and then spring upon the unwary entering his territory. Once he does so, physics gets a new set of rules. If he is unable to capture the quarry immediately, he will chase said quarry (which is what everyone wants anyway). While Gambo can only shamble at a slow rate, his quarry can run quickly. Therefore, local laws of physics are changed so that, no matter how fast his prey run, they cannot escape him. He usually makes his capture after the prey has tripped over a convenient vine, box, or some other mundane obstruction put there by magic (or desperate scriptwriters ).

Motivation: Twofold: Gambo is there for the entertainment of his masters and viewers of the films they sell to the public. Through a sophisticated array of cameras and microphones (all with their own silent locomotion and invisible to the naked eye), all the details of his attacks are transmitted back to his masters. These shows provide his masters with entertainment as well as fodder for the super hot black market in zombie and mummy attack DVDs. Secondly, Gambo himself is attempting to reverse the curse which made him a zombie. Once freed, he would continue to ravage women and use his knowledge of magic to use their sexual energy to revitalize himself, giving him virtual immortality. A win-win scenario. Since the more women he rapes the better his brain works, he wants to meet as many Shokushu students as possible. Only his programming forces him to adhere to the school's 10% rule.

Psychological Profile: Most of his brain has rotted away. So he is very unstable.

Personality: As a zombie, he doesn't have much personality at all. He does gain strength and intelligence from the women he takes, so he does spend a great deal of time planning his next encounter.

Sexual Oddities: Enjoys when various body parts break off inside or on victims.

Human Disguise Form? He wishes! But, no. I suppose he could be mistaken for human at a distance, in very, very low light, as he shambles on. (see the beginning of Night of the Living Dead)

Clothing: Torn and ragged pants, shirt, and shoes. Sometimes wears a hat or crown. Sometimes wears a suit jacket. Clothing seems to be rotting away and can be torn quite easily. (Not that you'd want to tear them!)

Special Attributes:
Time & Space distortion (She runs fast. He walks slowly. He catches her. You figure it out.)
Continuity Negation (Not sure about this one.)
Body parts able to function when separated from his body. (Ok. This is usually a mummy trick. But, hey! I get some leeway here, right?)
Remarkably strong.

Distinguishing features: Looks like a rotting zombie. Sometimes has various body parts missing (an arm/hand, one or both eyes, nose or jaw, you know). Semen, while white at its base, is mostly brownish or reddish.

Behavior: When not doing his job (see history), he will spend every possible moment researching ways to remove the curse. Since gaining sentience, he has agonized over his state.

Capabilities: Able to drain sexual energy from his female victims. Also has several magics and magical abilities available to him.

His masters have given him the ability to create rather elaborate illusions in order to lure curious females. He can make various archeological sites as well as other location based illusions. He can maintain these illusions even while engaged with his victims for the purpose of luring the same victims back and thus creating repeat business, especially if the victims are particularly beautiful. (Victims will know where to go to avoid the zombie, right? )

Actually, Gambo has the ability to use an almost unlimited array of magic. However, his masters only arm him with a very small subset of abilities, just enough to perform his role. We don't know how much magic he could use should he ever break free of their control.

Weaknesses: Being a zombie, he has several. He cannot go to his victims, they must come to him. (Exception: he can go to Madison and does so time and time again during his off hours. [an inside joke that I hope Madison gets]) While a good portion of his brain was restored, he still has difficulty reasoning.

Likes: !!!BRAINS!!! Shopping malls (for the obvious reason). Curious women. Polkas, both German & Polish. Despite his cursed state, he truly enjoys ravaging women. And though incapable of thinking it through, he would likely continue to collect and ravage women after curing himself of his affliction.

Dislikes: Uninquisitive girls. Machetes (we don't speak of that incident). Dogs who bark or cats who hiss, both of which can warn potential victims of his presence. OK, basically any animal that can prematurely reveal his presence. Soccer.

History: Gambo, named Quixxal Gambolzot while still living, comes from the planet Malekort. Malekort is roughly three times the size of Earth. But due to its lower density, has roughly the same gravity. Malekort has millions of ancient tombs and ruins dotting its surface and in caves. When the relatively small population discovered this, "grave robbing" became a widespread problem. The government of Malekort did not have sufficient forces to guard all the sites but did have a firm grasp of the darker magical arts. So it came up with a rather clever solution. Mummies were reanimated and triggered to attack anyone who entered the restricted area.

As this system became more and more useful, they ran out of mummies. (They still wanted to study and do experiments on some.) So they branched out to creating zombies, ironically robbing graves to prevent grave robbing. Both mummies and zombies were programmed to attack anyone not possessing a coded transmitter who entered their defense perimeters. Both were given the ability to refuel themselves by unusual means. Both gained energy through sexual encounters with females. And zombies had the added ability to gain energy through male brains. (The mages were particularly evil at that time.)

Those in charge of security so enjoyed their work that they programmed the mummies and zombies to knock out males where they were and to bring the women, usually kicking and screaming, to 'sacrificial alters' where surveillance systems could transmit the show back to headquarters, ostensibly for the purpose of "identifying the intruders for prosecution".

After over a millennium, security systems have progressed. And the mummies and zombies are being phased out. Gambo has just been decommissioned. Rather than destroying the zombies, the government has decided to scatter them in case they are needed later. As a signature to the Shokushu treaty, they have several Shokushu hunting licenses available to them. They've used one of these to send Gambo to Shokushu to keep him "happy" until they decide his ultimate fate. They reprogrammed him to make him suitable for the island and set up a mobile surveillance system so they can enjoy the show... err, so they can monitor his functions. These cameras are fully mobile and undetectable by humans (even psychic humans).

Should the ADD become a problem (the Supreme Council has begun to partake in the lucrative slave trade), they are able to program him for space missions also.

Miscellaneous:
Gambo gains energy by eating male brains (see below) and capturing the released sexual energy of his female victims. His masters have programmed the sexual energy capture to be the highest priority. Therefore, Gambo will ignore unconscious males if there are any females within range. (And every female on the island is within range.)

Given limited free will by his masters, Gambo is able to insert himself in locations of his choosing in order to capture females. His masters are still able to position him if they so desire.

While Gambo works best in an outdoor setting, his masters have made him available to the school should they need his services. This opens up RP possibilities in the N.I.C.E labs, the Basement, and other forums. I'm sure his masters would make Gambo available to Head Girls (though not prefects).

A quick note on the BRAIN thing:
As a requirement for his presence on the island, his hunger for BRAINS has been neutralized. Let me repeat that: as long as he is on the island, he will not hunger for the brains of males. In fact, they are likely to keep the brain hunger turned off on any space mission they send him on. AT NO TIME IN THESE FORUMS WILL Gambo EAT, OR TRY TO EAT, ANYONE'S BRAIN!

Finally
I'm not sure when I'll get around to playing Gambo. Right now, I'm mostly looking for comments and suggestions. My primary goal is to really emphasize the horror aspect. So any suggestions helping with that would be greatly appreciated. I'm not sure I'm ready to play a monster. Every time I think I have them figured out, they do something that surprises me.

Films of Quixxal "Gambo" Gambolzot
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Sadly, Gambo didn't get to dispatch the boyfriend. He kept running and never came back for his girl. That did mean that she entertained Gambo and the audience for quite a long time.


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While a popular story, it wasn't popular with Gambo. He was just a supporting character to the villain, whose hands can be seen in this frame. He could have caught the girl without the man's help. (There's probably an "eww!" factor to some of these. I know many of the stories in the original revolve around the zombie and his daughter. While I do not know it as a fact, I suspect that many times the girl pictured on the cover with the zombie is his daughter.)

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Gambo made up in yet another character in a very popular series. Don't worry. The archer behind him is not really there. He was shooped in for the cover photo. The girl was exploring these ruins alone.

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Gambo became so popular that he was used in more urban settings. While annoying, the gunshot wounds didn't slow him down. And this girl turned out to be a screamer, an audience favorite. Her memory was wiped and she was used in several other films. Sadly, Gambo was only in a couple of them.
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Another popular story where the actress was kidnapped and placed in harm's way. In fact, most of the cemetery scenes were done that way, since once Gambo began to guard cemeteries, grave robbing ended almost overnight.

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An early film with Gambo. This was a low budget zombie porn flick with kidnapped girls. While Gambo thoroughly enjoyed himself, they lacked any artistic merit.

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A later series starring Gambo after a long layoff. The layoff caused his body to deteriorate, which was one of the things that made the series so popular. This is just about the worst Gambo has ever looked.

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Another case where the boyfriend didn't help. At least her boyfriend and brother tried to help her. And don't worry, the girl always revived before a zombie attacked her. Sometimes she was revived by the film crew medical staff.
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You might recognize this scene of a remake of an earlier Gambo film. This one was filmed 45 years later. They had kidnapped a girl for this film. But the girl pictured happened to wander on the set. She was on vacation and exploring the area alone. One disabled vehicle later, we have a film. Don't worry. They still used the kidnapped girl. She was cast as someone trying to rescue the other girl. Her claims to be unaware of what was happening fit in well with that storyline.

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Gambo became so popular, that they didn't even have to put the girl on the cover to get audiences to flock to the theaters and buy the graphic novels in droves.

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This was a lesser used and fairly unpopular theme of Gambo "rescuing" the damsel in distress. Yes, it ended up not being the rescue she had hoped for.
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Remember when I mentioned Gambo likes to break things off in his victims? So do many of his coworkers.

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Here's a coworker of Gambo on set. This film (which also starred Gambo) was so popular, that they decided to do more schoolgirl films. That's one of the reasons Gambo was sent to Shokushu.



Can someone identify the girl in the attached file. She looks to me like she is a character in an anime. However, I don't know the name of the character or anime. I've lost the link to the pic, so no help there.

girl in the attched picture is nami from one piece

anyway on to gabbo,. I have to say he's well made though I will say this, he is a zombie ;^..^ hard to think of a zombie sexually but, horror wise I have to admit a semi-sentient alien zombie trying to tear my clothes off is definately frightening and unique. criticism I'd have to say the only thing I'd say uhmm... hmmm well actually never mind I don't see anything you would need to add or remove to make him more fun at this point . he's very well put together bala

Also will say how coincidental we both post our monster on the same day :p

I agree I think he is very well thought out. I would be horrified just be being chased by him. Not to mention what would happen when caught up with me.

An excellent monster.

Very well thought? I think that doesn't even satisfy the amount of dedication he seemed to have. Bravo, Bala, amazing scary-yet-sexually-fun monster! Can't wait to read of his adventures on the island Also, I laughed with the second post, really gave me the laugh I needed.

And well, Erica made me think about picturing a zombie sexually, but then I remembered this parody porn videos of Left 4 Dead, and I had to make a >____> face.
Anyway, did I mention I look forward to his doings? Awesome monster

Wow! Thank you, everyone. I wasn't expecting this response. Wow. Thank you. Now, people. Don't let those responses stop you from critiquing Gambo. I honestly didn't think he was really good (or well written). I'm still stunned, and very pleased, by the response so far.

@Erica: Thank you for Nami. And it is weird we posted a monster on the same day. I haven't had a chance to look yours over yet. I will welcome him or her tonight.


Exactly. That was what I intended. I think he would work especially well with the more jaded girls on the island. Their response would change from "great, another monster. " to "EEEEK! Zombie! I can't let it eat my brain!" And I really wanted to emphasize the horror aspect, of which there doesn't seem to be much on this board. (I don't know why I wanted to go horror.)

@Raitei: I'm glad I could give you a chuckle. I considered including this pic in that group...

Most of Gambo's coworkers are a little embarrassed about this. It's terrible that people would make fun of a zombie with that affliction.

I LOVE IT! I've been looking for zombie "love" for a long time.

I can't wait for Syll, Rayn, or Devon to meet him.

I thought I'd commented on this one a few days ago, I must have forgotten to hit submit or something

Anyway, I love it! Not just because I have a bit of a thing for zombies. This character has a great potential for cheesy horror flick moments and genuine terror, and the chance for a student to play a real scream queen as well

Fantastic monster Bala XD I think he's got a great mix of humor and legitimate scariness. The physics-warping movie magic is especially great.

The second post made me giggle XD I had no idea there was actually a market for hot zombie-on-girl action. Aaaaaah, makes me want to finish my damn finals so I can play left 4 dead again! Not, ya know, that I giggle hysterically every time a smoker grabs Zoey or anything...

Yes very funny. Strange we haven't seen any undead hellspawn before now though.

He can do a Thriller theme for the school prom. With some help for the other zombies.

Thank you, everyone. I can't tell you how humbled I am by the response to Gambo. I hope his threads can live up to it. I should have time after Xmas to have him Moonwalk his way into your hearts. (Well, into something anyway.)

@Katya: Yes, smoker & Zoey action seems popular. (I haven't played the game. I hope they are in there.)
And yes, there is a big demand for hot zombie-on-girl action. Though most of it is in Italian.
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So it doesn't just happen to me? See? I'm not a ditz after all.

Unintended Consequence Alert:
The existence of Gambo & his coworkers has caused all male tomb raiders or tomb raider wannabees to include at least one attractive female in their raiding parties. The girl's cut of the loot is thought of as a life insurance policy. (Although, it is not unknown for a guy on a loot-loaded truck to kick the woman off said truck, both to increase his cut and as a way to distract the ADZ.)

First, props on usinsg the awesome Simon Garth as yoru art inspiration. Marvel Zombie comics were always cool. Second, I really liek the name, feels olds school. Third, I wish you hadn't beaten to the punch on this one--this was my original plan before I made Veus the Superintellignet Fornicating Fungus.


Regardless, I dig the fact that you make up for his gait with magic. honestly, another common spell that migh be handy is fog conjuring--it's easy to sneak up on somone in the fog, let them run and brak fom your first grapple, and then get lost and stuck in the same problem. It's a classic horror staple, and it works like a charm.

I'll assume this isn't necromancy since Bala said in the original thread that the character is on hold but she's looking for advice in the long term. If I'm incorrect in this assumption, my apologies.

Aaaaaanyway...

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

I love genre savvy characters and I have a great love for all those pulpy, pre-Comics Code Authority era schlock horror comics. (Yeah, yeah, my inner geek is showing. I know) If anything, I'd play up the camp of the character. Really play to the genre standards and conventions. Play scenes like it's being shot as a film or scripted as a Warren Comics book. It's refreshing to see a character firmly rooted in Western horror archetypes, which is something I'm admittedly more familiar with than the monster hentai stuff. All in all, I think this is a great high concept, and I know you're a clever player, so I look forward to seeing him in action.

Oh, and if you ever need a victim, Anna was born to play a slasher flick victim.

@Theophenes: Simon was the best choice for a logical reason. And I just beat you to the punch because Zelphie beat me to the punch with her mummy. I wanted the mummy, blast! I don't know why I didn't think of fog. It's so totally obvious. Thank you for the suggestion.

@Anna: Thank you. I do plan on a little cheese. Not so much that he becomes a joke. I still want him to be scary. And I should be able to play scenes like they're being filmed, because they are being filmed. I'm preparing his opening scene now and part of what I'm doing is blocking the scene (I think that's the term) for the cameras.

And I'll put Anna on the list of scream queens.


Also, I should bump this topic every couple of months while I'm asking for input. It was definitely appreciated.

Blocking the screen?