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 Dream Ravager 
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Name: Wraith
Race: Unknown
Type: Poltergeist
Place of Birth: Unknown
Gender: Neuter(if acceptable, otherwise male)
Age: Unknown
Height: 5'5"
Weight: No physical body
Eye Color: Red
Skin Color: Grey
Skin Texture: Dry and tough
Hair? None
Body Build: Frail and light
Tail? None
Tentacles? Yes
Number of Tentacles: Two, but could make more in dreams if desired.
Wings? None
Cock Size: No cock
Fighting Style: Does not fight
Motivation: Entertainment and nurishment through absorbing sexual energy.
Psychological Profile: An entity that sees himself as superior to the other monsters, despite not having a physical body and knowing some of them possess the same abilities as he. This is due to being able to avoid harm from convential attacks.
Personality: Dark, sadistic, enjoys toying with emotions to get what he wants.
Sexual Oddities: No sexual organs
Human Disguise Form? Yes
Human Disguise Appearance: Anyone a victim trusts, but can only be done in dreams.
Clothing: Mostly tattered rags
Special Attributes: Able to move through the school undetected, except for a sudden chill in the air when present.
Distinguishing features: Two short tentacle like fingers on each hand along with one long one in between.
Behavior: Likes to pose as friends or lovers of victims to lull them into a false sense of security.
Capabilities: Hypnosis to put girls to sleep, ravage girls in dreams, and arouse girls while awake particularly in inappropriate situations.
Weaknesses: He can be force out of his victim's mind if they have a very strong will.
Likes: Sleeping girls.
Dislikes: Hates if a girl wakes up before he's had a chance to have her.
History: Wraith is a being created through the combined sadistic and lustful feelings that have built up in the school from both students and monsters, particularly in the basement. At first, Wraith himself was unaware of this, nor did he care at the time either. This changed during a visit to the basement and sensed a presence forming that felt very similar to his own. He then absorbed the perverse feelings into himself, preventing the creation of another specter and more competition for prey.
Miscellaneous: Wraith has recently discovered that significant exposure to mana can allow him to become visible and interact with the physical world. However, it's only been temporary so far and he is seeking a way to make it happen at will.
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Mon Apr 07, 2008 1:35 am
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oi! Muh territory's been intruded upon! >.> welcome anyways!


Mon Apr 07, 2008 2:06 am
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Yes I realize there were other monsters with the same abilities as Wraith, but I was playing Wraith under the name Aquas before. This was before the site was rebuilt.


Mon Apr 07, 2008 2:25 am
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I'm sure it's fine. Could you add a little more detailing to your description so some of us wouldbe happless girls know what we are fully dealing with?

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Mon Apr 07, 2008 2:36 am
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I agree with my busty, blue hair classmate, there needs to be more detail. Also, having very little detail may mirror itself in the RP which makes for bad RP.

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Mon Apr 07, 2008 3:01 am
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I will add more when I can think of it. I rarely am able to come up with details off the top of my head.


Mon Apr 07, 2008 3:10 am
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"Interesting... One who shares my abilities..."

The voice in the dark gave an imperceptible growl.

(Welcome... I hope you enjoy your stay.)

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Wed Apr 09, 2008 9:05 am
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I know it took a while, but I believe I've added enough information on my monster. There's also a link to his picture if anyone wants a better idea of what he looks like.


Wed Apr 16, 2008 2:53 am
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Wraith wrote:
I know it took a while, but I believe I've added enough information on my monster. There's also a link to his picture if anyone wants a better idea of what he looks like.


Looks good, keep in mind a profile is never set in stone. You can always edit it later if you obtain new abilities or skills. Welcome to campus, and Cheers!

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Wed Apr 16, 2008 6:56 am
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I have finally decided on Wraith's history and how he came into existence. I'm also considering making a short story on how he discovers it for himself.


Sat Mar 16, 2013 3:54 am
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Oh~! A short story sounds really cool~! Give me a heads up when you do it c:


Mon Mar 18, 2013 6:22 pm
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Well, I've decided I'm no longer satisfied with Wraith's current appearance. It looks more like a normal monster than a specter. So I've picked out three potential pictures to better show his new appearance, and I would like everyone's opinion on which one suits Wraith best.

Here's Wraith's original appearance
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Here are the three pictures:

Picture A
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Picture B
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Picture C
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Sun Jul 14, 2013 10:27 pm
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Picture B :)

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Picture B looks the creepiest to me. So I vote B.

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Mon Jul 15, 2013 6:20 am
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A is a strong candidate too, but in the end I would go for B.

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