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Author: | EvilRoeSlade [ Mon Jun 23, 2008 2:48 am ] |
Post subject: | Kerith the minotaur |
Black oil and chemicals dripped from the huge sword of the beast. The mechanical corpses of his foes lie shattered and twitching before him, some still crackling with the electricity that once powered a mockery of life. Now what was once there's would be his. He stalked into the hold of the ship, drawn by the sound of feminine whimpers and screams. Name: Kerith Race: Minotaur Type: Mythic beast Place of Birth: Earth Gender: Male Nationality: Greece Age: 147 Height: 8'7" Weight: Approx. 2 tons Eye Color: Red Skin Color: Black Skin Texture: Rough Hair: Short, rough Hair Color: Black Body Build: Humanoid Tail: Whiplike Tail Length: 2'4" Tentacles: Cybernetic Number of Tentacles: 5 Wings: None Cock Size: 14 inches # of Cocks: 1 Fighting Style: Fists, swords, axes, machine guns Motivation: Lust, desire to breed Psychological Profile: Battle-crazed, conflict-seeking Personality: Gruff, unsubtle, and uncaring Sexual Oddities: Sometimes uses horns in play Human Disguise Form: None Clothing: None Special Attributes: Exudes a powerful musk when angry or excited. Though odorless, it incites arousal in human females. Distinguishing features: Bull ring through nose, cybernetic hand, scar over left eye. Behavior: Swift and to the point, abducts with as little fanfare as possible before toying with his captive. Capabilities: Strength and endurance are awesome to behold. Incredibly agile and fast despite his size. Left hand is obviously mechanical. In addition to functioning as a normal appendage, the palm can open to sprout five mechanical tendrils. Located on the wrist is a button which activates a stealth field generator, rendering Kerith invisible. Weaknesses: Becomes almost mindless in the heat of battle or sex, while this makes him capable of shrugging off even more wounds, the opportunity to exploit him during this stage is obvious. Likes: Virgins, worthy opponents Dislikes: Males, poison weapons, operas, disrespectful victims History: When the age of legends passed the earth, minotaurs grew scarce and were forced to hide from the growing power of civilization. Kerith is the last of his kind, and though the world no longer has room for him, he is determined to live life as a minotaur should, raping and destroying whatever he pleases. Obviously, these activities couldn't sustain themselves forever, and caused countless headaches for the ADD. He proved to be both an elusive and deadly adversary, and eventually, no longer willing to put up with the loss of life, they sent an envoy to explain Shokushu and offer him transport there. After raping the envoy senseless, he agreed, being intrigued by the offer. However, he soon grew bored with the arrangement, and never truly intended to honor his end of the agreement in the first place. Through deals, threats, and betrayal amongst the other monsters he acquired various technologies that he became fascinated with, including the replacement of his hand which he had lost long ago in a battle with an ADD agent. Later, he acquired a spaceship and turned to piracy, becoming a hazard to the ADD once again, as well as all other spacefaring beings. He sometimes returns to Shokushu to relax after a difficult battle, and to partake in the delights it has to offer. Whew, alright, that's my character. This is my first time getting involved in something like this... did I do it right? Any takers?! |
Author: | EvilRoeSlade [ Mon Jun 23, 2008 3:15 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Kerith the minotaur |
And hey, I almost forgot |
Author: | Severity [ Mon Jun 23, 2008 3:21 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Kerith the minotaur |
Welcome to Shokushu! I hope to see you around... *wink* |
Author: | Kalysta [ Mon Jun 23, 2008 3:39 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Kerith the minotaur |
"Ummm well welcome but I think I should go find someplace else to hide." Kalysta welcomed him expressionless and emotionless as she always was. Her voice was contanstly monotone. |
Author: | Naoko [ Mon Jun 23, 2008 4:49 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Kerith the minotaur |
Looks wonderful, welcome to the boards! If you have any questions or anything, feel free to PM me ^^ |
Author: | Elise Renfroe [ Mon Jun 23, 2008 6:34 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Kerith the minotaur |
Looks good. One little nit-pick though. "Martial" isn't a style of fighting. "Martial arts" refers to any method of combat practiced as sport, and "martial" just means relating somehow to warfare or fighting. |
Author: | EvilRoeSlade [ Mon Jun 23, 2008 6:45 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Kerith the minotaur |
That's true. I didn't really think about that very much, I just meant that he fights with physical weapons, rather than magic or whatnot. I just edited to be more specific, now it says what weapons in particular he likes. |
Author: | swordsman_adrift [ Tue Jun 24, 2008 2:30 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Kerith the minotaur |
Never seen a purely physical monster such as yourself 'round these parts. Usually we're getting a lot of psionics-based creatures or those that rely on persuasion and lures, so you're a welcome change. Enjoy, neighbor. |
Author: | EvilRoeSlade [ Tue Jun 24, 2008 3:01 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Kerith the minotaur |
Oh, don't tell me the good old-fashioned rapist has gone out of style?! Thanks for the welcome. |
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