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-=EXPERIMENT FILE: 13=-

Name:
13 or Skwel

Race:
Gelatinous tentacle creature

Type:
Shapeshifter

Place of Birth:
Test tube

Gender:
Male

Nationality:
None

Age:
21

Height:
Varies

Weight:
unknown

Eye Color: Depends on shape (reg: One huge squid-like eye)

Skin Color:
Transparent blue (varies with form)

Skin Texture:
smooth

Hair?
Depends on form

Hair Color:
Brown

Body Build:
Gelatinous

Tail? No

Tentacles? Yes, in reg form

Number of Tentacles: 15

Wings?
No

Cock Size: 6'*2"

# of Cocks: 15 in reg form

Fighting Style: Flailing of limbs, depending on form.

Motivation: revenge

Psychological Profile: He's a bit aggressive with authorities, feeling like they are all after him. He's escaped from an ADD raid after all.

Personality: He's silent, but rash, and constantly lets his attention waver.

Sexual Oddities: Can exude anphrodiasic from tentacle in normal form, and cums alot. After cumming once (takes a while), he's practically spent.

Human Disguise Form? Yes, but form depends

Special Attributes: Can change form

Distinguishing features: The smoothness of his skin and one eye always remain yellow

Behavior: He's a loner, but really likes a good bang.

Capabilities: He can turn into a number of things, as long as he's seen it.

Weaknesses: He has trouble moving once he comes, and he's always clueless.

Likes: Sex with hot ladies (who doesn't)

Dislikes: The ADD, seeing as they almost killed him along with all of his brothers two weeks after he was created.


Last edited by gguy123 on Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:57 am, edited 1 time in total.



Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:40 am
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What's it out to get revenge on? Or have you just not put up the other details yet?

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Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:44 am
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It could use some more details.

Victims are very interested in knowing what they are getting ravaged by. If they don't have any discernable.detail in their monster. Then it's kinda a blank. Just include abit more details as to your motivations.

Check out some other monster profiles for abit of help and insight if you are having trouble. I mean... I am interested in your monster. But I don't get any real discernable detail or any visualization with so many blanks.


Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:48 am
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Right. I mean, sure, your creature was born in a test tube, but was it 10,000 years ago by ancient, hyper-advanced scientists, or just yesterday, on accident, at the science lab? Know what I mean?

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Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:57 am
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Um, I posted by mistake, I editted it now.


Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:58 am
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Thanks for clarifying. Welcome!

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