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 Wandering mercenary - Rahs Xalezel 
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Post Wandering mercenary - Rahs Xalezel
Hey everyone, I'm new here at Shokushu, and hope we can have some fun here :wink:
This monster is a work in process... since I feel the need to edit and change stuff at random times.
Updates will be in this color, even if they are not so important

== Sending new file ==

Name: Rahs Xalezel
Race: Syrictae (genetically modified)
Place of Birth: Syrictova
Gender: Male
Nationality: No such thing in his planet. Though, large pieces of land are known to belong to groups of families.
Age: 53 solar years. An equivalent of 29 years of age for humans.
Height: 1.98 meters (around 6'5 feet)
Weight: 92 kg or around 203 pounds.
Eye Color: Bright blue
Skin Color: Dark green
Skin Texture: Pretty soft to the touch, but kinda slippery when you want to get a good hold.
Hair?: None
Hair Color: - - -
Body Build: Pretty muscular and athletic since he was trained to be a fighter.
Tail?: Yes, even though cannot be seen in the picture.
Tail Length: Almost 2 feet
Tentacles?: Yes, as a result of being genetically modified (details available in background).
Number of Tentacles: He can summon an undefined number of tentacles from beneath his skin, and they can be of different shapes or lengths. He can modify some to have suckers or an opening at the end. They can also secrete a very strong aphrodisiac for his victims.
Wings?: No
Wingspan: - - -
Wing Color: - - -
Cock Size: 35 cm, or around 14 inches of length, and around 2 inches and a half in diameter.
# of Cocks: One
Fighting Style: Rahs was destined to be a fighter. He was trained in many martial arts and mastership in different kinds of weapons, including both melee and long range ones. His weapons of choice is the sword and lance, but he is also likes to engage in hand-to-hand combat. He's very agile and fast, most of his strikes being lightning fast, and his accuracy is excellent as well.

Motivation: Many years after his modification, he found out that it became incredibly hard to find battles and wars in which to participate in. He only was able to feel pleasure when he was fighting a tough opponent, but with this new realization, he wanted to find more ways to get the pleasure he longed for. Rahs began to try to obtain it using a more sexual approach, making the most of the new ability he got while being experimented with. Finding and raping female beings is how he gets pleasure now, and he won't stop until either all beautiful females in the galaxy are gone, or he is killed. Not even giving him a war to fight in will stop him... That would only make him more vicious.

Psychological Profile: Rahs holds a soldier's honor code, and so tends to be kinda indifferent or distant with people he doesn't know. He used to hope for a peaceful era in his home planet, but eventually gave in to the violence, and he could only live to fight another foe. He gets excited if he finds a reason to fight, but he's usually disappointed if the opponent does not meet his expectations. The former warrior is always looking for action and possible targets to abuse or fight. While he searches tenaciously, he looks calm and calculating in social locations, and that is because he is always thinking in too many things, taking in details and formulating plans to achieve his goals.
Even if he was raised to be a soldier, it's natural in his species to be constantly trying to achieve a perfect knowledge. He's as intellectual as athletic.

Personality: If it isn't required to fulfill his needs immediately, Rahs is silent and polite to most strangers, since the only times he gets off his ship besides looking for trouble and females to take advantage of, are when he lands on a planet to get food and intel, and resupply his ship.
Sexual Oddities: Likes bondage and domination since he was modified. Is also fond of rough penetration, humiliation, tit fucking, and forced fellatio.
He usually tries to increase the lust inside each of his victims so they don't put up much of a struggle and lets them know they are really aroused by it. If it's useless, he then will stop any sweet-talk or manners and will only care to satisfy himself.
Human Disguise Form?: None
Human Disguise Appearance: - - -

Clothing: He usually wears no clothes, since most syrictae like to be in the nude, but he always wears at least some minor protective armor on his body, considering the skin is pretty thick and tough. He wears a gray metal mask and a green helm, which covers most of his face. Also sports a pair of white gauntlets, his right one is slightly similar to a skull. His feet are protected by a light but resistant pair of boots that reach up to the knees. Sometimes he wears a scabbard for a sword or a lance, and a messenger bag if he expects to pick supplies.
Depending on the mission or the place he's in, he may wear a brown coat in populated places, or a full armor for missions where hostilities are expected... and desired.

Distinguishing features: His mask, tail and skin color is what identify him the most.
Capabilities: He is very strong, even able to take down an opponent twice his size with sheer strength. Counts with a superhuman speed and reflexes to even being able to come out victorious with his cunning plans and fast fighting style.Is also very intelligent since his military experience taught him to always think in a strategy in battle. Most of the time, he's thinking in many ways to defeat his foe, considering a long painful fight, or even a more efficient and direct approach. Also, because of his race derives from snakes, he's got a decently good sense of smell, and can detect heat sources in a wide area around him.

After his modification, he is able to summon tentacles that come out beneath his skin, which help him in abusing and holding the sexual victims, or even in giving him an edge in battle. He can't feel pain or pleasure with his tentacles, so if an enemy manages to cut one or many of these appendages, he won't even feel it. At much, he can only notice a slight pressure whenever he holds or touches something with them.
His second modification is more useful to him in battle. He can create electricity and control magnetism. He doesn't like to show the full potential of this ability, since he loves to have a good fight. At most, he uses it to shock opponents, or electrify his melee weapons for more effectiveness. He can create an electric current anywhere in his body, so he can also use this to stimulate a woman in many ways, like touching sensible spots or even using it on his cock to literally rock the victim's world. His magnetism can attract metal objects at him or repel them.
He is a soldier, ergo, he has a lot of stamina, managing to run for hours and hours without getting tired. Even after reaching orgasm, he can continue to rape the poor woman until he finally feels satisfied, not even caring if she loses consciousness. Has an amazing healing capability unless wounds are very deep (in which case he'd have to rest for the to heal quickly) which is a combined effect of his species adptability to war and the modification of his body.

Weaknesses: Rahs is one tough adversary, since he likes to use his abilities if he feels in a disadvantage, and also because he feels less pain thanks to his tough skin. His helm and mask also protect him of mind control and illusions, so the only sure way to harm this boy is to hit hard and constantly. He can be burned, crushed, and is still vulnerable to many things that could harm a human being, but of course to a lesser extent.

Likes: He loves to take care of his weapons and firearms. Even the act of cleaning them is like a ritual to him. Rahs also enjoys the night, fresh temperatures and bathing. His intellectual side makes him fond of puzzles and strategic games like chess. He also loves music and literature. And though he rarely has time for that, he's fond of machinery and repairing broken objects.
Dislikes: Cowards, egoistic persons, things not going as he planned, and weaklings.

History: His home planet, Syrictova, is first of the many colonies his species has won over the course of centuries. The syrictae are a humanoid species that derive from snakes. They are a military might and are also famous for being extraordinary scholars, and adept at literature and philosophy. Their culture is a rich and interesting fusion of these contrasting concepts. When Rahs was born, Syrictova was having civil war, and there was need for soldiers for the territory he was in. His fate was to be a warrior, just like the rest of the children at that time. Time passed, and he managed to grow into a fine killing machine and tactician, helping to achieve the premature end of the war. This were of course good news, but also disappointing to the offspring that knew nothing but to fight and to die.

Rahs soon realized that he needed to leave his planet and go out in search of adventure and battles. If he was going to travel between worlds, he needed to obtain money one way or another. And so he came to the decision that being a mercenary was the best option, since it allowed him to find bounties on dangerous criminals and get rewarded to do what he likes the most, but had to endure other dull tasks like transportation and such. Business got boring quickly, and people were getting used to only famous bounty hunters, so he felt like he needed more reputation.

After a transportation mission to Vanejin VI, he came across a space station that served as clandestine laboratories for experts in genetics before reporting back to his employer. The scientists were charged with creating a procedure that they could apply to living beings in the slave pens of Vanejin IV so they could be more useful in "taking care" of the poor girls that were in the pens. Problem was they lacked test subjects since their communications systems were fried and couldn't call for some in the hostile planet.

Rahs managed to fix their problem and happily volunteered for being a test subject after they offered an enhancement that could help him in becoming the perfect warrior. More dangerous criminals meant more money and tougher fights. His genetic modifications granted him the abilities described in the section of Capabilities.

Unfortunately for him, business didn't get much better. He needed something that could make him feel alive. He returned with the scientists and told them his complaint. They couldn't do more, but to offer a human slave girl as an attempt to calm down the angered soldier. It was then that he found out sexual pleasure was an amazing way to feel good, and so he became fond of this new toy of his. He abused the girl so much that she just couldn't go on, and so he decided to drop her near civilization in the first planet he could find. As he was returning to the ship, he could overhear something about this place called Shokushu. After finding more information about this place, he also became aware of the ADD.

It was like a compensation for lack of violence, and Rahs knew he was going to enjoy this new school and the company of beautiful ADD agents. To control his "visits" to Shokushu, he still works as a mercenary, taking in jobs that can also get him some ADD attention.

Recently, Rahs was employed by a very obnoxious slaver that was referred to as Oliver. His mission was to bring back a beautiful specimen of the heron tribe and he was successful. However, on his way back to Oliver's base, Rahs found out that an ADD agent was in his ship...

The agent surprised him with a blow from her katana, destroying somewhat his chair and damaging his precious helmet. After dealing with the agent and the heron, and also after killing Oliver, Rahs sent part of the slaver's money back to his old home in Syrictova.

After parting ways, he traveled back to the planet he left behind, and was welcomed by his people as a brave soldier that continued to do his duty even outside in space. However, the news his armor had been damaged wasn't taken with joy.

With the money he obtained, he was able to get a new armor from the best blacksmiths in Syrictova and also fused it with better technology. Part of the rest of the money was also used to modify Sky Breaker as well. His stay in Syrictova didn't much after his new equipment was built, and so he left again, still in search of new things to do in the vastness of space.


Ship's description: His black and blue space ship is a fighter class, customized for long range and transportation. It's a small-mid sized ship with an armory, a wide open area for transportation goods, and two small rooms for crew. There's a bathroom with a shower next to the rooms, and to the other side, the bridge can be entered. The ship's name is Skybreaker.

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== Transfer complete ==

Well, that was something. I hope you enjoy this character as much as I'll enjoy using him :wink:
Some persons tend to say "be gentle with me" when they meet others... but in this case, you girls should be the ones saying that... but of course, I won't :D

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No need to scream, unless it's due the pleasure... Rahs Xalezel
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No one can compare to a goddess of beauty - Elizia
The mare of your night, there in your darkest hour - Sylvana

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A cold woman - Sydr Haldar
The blazing huntress - Miria Dyranda


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Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:35 am
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Nice character! Welcome to Shokushu :)

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Welcome! I'm sure you'll enjoy your stay at the Campus when you come to visit. Glad to see we have another patrolling those Space Lanes and keeping those pesky A.D.D Agents in check. :)

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What a detailed character you have there, welcome to the campus!

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Welcome to Shokushu, hope your stay is a "pleasurable" one.

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Thank you all, nice meeting you. Oh, I'll be sure to keep the agents in check. And yes, I believe my visits to the campus will be... memorable.

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No need to scream, unless it's due the pleasure... Rahs Xalezel
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No one can compare to a goddess of beauty - Elizia
The mare of your night, there in your darkest hour - Sylvana

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The blazing huntress - Miria Dyranda


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Greetings and welcome.
Shokusho can always use another monst...
WHAT AM I SAYING???!!!

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You're saying Shokushu can always use another mons...
Oh wait :lol: (think so... XD)

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No need to scream, unless it's due the pleasure... Rahs Xalezel
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No one can compare to a goddess of beauty - Elizia
The mare of your night, there in your darkest hour - Sylvana

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A cold woman - Sydr Haldar
The blazing huntress - Miria Dyranda


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I like the detail you've given to this guy's abilities- then, I'm a sucker for detailed profiles in any case. Hm, and Karivnie's a merchant; I'm sure that she could find something that caters to a wandering mercenary's... er... needs. ;)

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Nice~ I could see many interesting things with this character XD.

Poor girl or any that cross his path!

Welcome ^_^

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Thank you for the welcome Narrisa.
Yes.... Poor girls, having such a terrible luck to run into him :twisted:

Well, if you think you found the most interesting one, you can always PM to get it rolling! :wink:

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No need to scream, unless it's due the pleasure... Rahs Xalezel
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No one can compare to a goddess of beauty - Elizia
The mare of your night, there in your darkest hour - Sylvana

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A cold woman - Sydr Haldar
The blazing huntress - Miria Dyranda


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