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Author: | Ryu [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:41 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
Drains vitality .. But I guess it's fine since the girls aren't supposed to be seriously harmed ^_^ However, let me be the first to welcome you in Shokushu, pirate. May your loot be rich in gold and beautiful women. Have a nice stay, and I bet there's certain beings in space who feel attracted to you as well. See ya around. |
Author: | Fiona Macbeth [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 7:19 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
Very nicely done, Samantha. Welcome to Shokushu. I look foreword to our future encounter. Hopefully, I'll be able to get my ass in gear and work on getting my agent back into action again so that we can make that happen. |
Author: | Madison [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 3:15 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
I'm going to have to ask: This "Drains Vitality" thing, what exactly is involved? |
Author: | Samantha Harlock [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 3:27 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
Nothing special really. Just after she's done with somebody they feel more tired then they usually would because she absorbs some of their energy for herself plus what is expended just through the sex itself. |
Author: | Madison [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 4:49 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
You know... talking it over, it seems like there's not much really... monsterious about her. She seems more human then anything really. |
Author: | Kanoe [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 5:59 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
Besides the small horns and tail, this is just a human with a special power. Now having a humanoid monster/alien is fine but there needs to be something that at least makes students not want to be inevitably screwed by this monster. I say add some tentacles, can never go wrong there XP. |
Author: | Samantha Harlock [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:11 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
I could go more monsterous if I must. I was just trying to be vague since i was trying to keep her more of a humanoid "monster" and I wasn't quite sure what I could add without going too far from that. |
Author: | Kanoe [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:16 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
Well you can go all monster and have a human disguise if you like. That is fine. Its just this is about aliens and monsters raping students (or agents). It tends to lose that effect when the monster looks nearly identical to a human. |
Author: | Samantha Harlock [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:54 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
Minor adjustments and the addition of a picture. Found a picture I liked for her so I thought it might solve the problem of her not being monsterous enough. |
Author: | Therion [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:24 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
Welcome to Shokushu, I hope you enjoy your time here As for the not being scary enough part, how about a pet or a minion. Something monstrous or demonic that can be used to scare students and make them run to her maybe for protection only to find she is the real monster out to rape them when she shows her real form? Like since she is pirate maybe she has a skeleton crew (literally) or such Just ideas, don't mind me |
Author: | Samantha Harlock [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:50 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
The skeleton crew is a good idea and I had it mind earlier but I guess I forgot to put it in. So thanks for reminding me of that Therion. First post was edited with mention of the skeleton crew on the ship section. If anyone else has criticisms or ideas on things I should add feel free to mention them. I'm always open to constructive criticism, and offers to RP as well. |
Author: | Therion [ Fri Nov 05, 2010 10:30 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
Happy to be some help |
Author: | Allirabeth [ Sat Nov 06, 2010 12:00 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
Nice Ideas Can't wait to see how that plays out. |
Author: | PiaM. [ Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:53 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Samantha Harlock - Mysterious Pirate |
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