Sorry for our delay ... Welcome.
Ana and I, hope you enjoy yourself.
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| Author: | Ariste [ Fri Dec 24, 2010 6:32 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ariste |
Kakumaoh wrote: Ariste wrote: Weaknesses: Holy objects. (He is a demon after all.) I think this runs into the restriction on religious characters. Turning it into a psychological weakness might be enough to get by, but I can't say for certain. I tried to be non-specific as to what sort of holy objects but if it is a problem I can take that part out. Update: I went ahead and took it out anyway. Just to be on the save side. |
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| Author: | niellwyn [ Sat Dec 25, 2010 12:21 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ariste |
It looks from the general reception that a little could be done to make the character more malicious or frightening. I actually liked the concept, but admittedly I took what was presented and came to my own dastardly conclusions about his personality. As he is, without reading into the info much, I'd say the character is more disturbing (perhaps) than monstrous. It would be a good idea to try to make his "evil", for lack of a better word, beyond human ken. Just a suggestion. On an aside, I really like where the concept seems to be going, and I think it would be fun for him and Natsuki to meet. |
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| Author: | Allirabeth [ Mon Jan 03, 2011 5:43 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ariste |
Sorry for our delay ... Welcome. Ana and I, hope you enjoy yourself.
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| Author: | Rhaine Fischer [ Sun Mar 26, 2017 9:19 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ariste |
Likewise, welcome aboard. |
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| Author: | Madison [ Mon Mar 27, 2017 1:14 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Ariste |
Please don't necro old threads that have not been posted in 6 years. Locked. |
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