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Xen, a new monster :p
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Author:  XenKen [ Sun May 08, 2011 10:16 pm ]
Post subject:  Xen, a new monster :p
Monster Bio/Profile

Name: Xen
Gender: Male
Age: 19 human years old
Height: 6' 1"
Weight: 120 pounds (ways less then a human, not having most of the internal organs a human does)
Eye Color: Left one bright blue, right one darkish red
Skin Color: Pale
Hair Color: Pale White
Body Build: slender
Tail Length: 6' from base to tip, slender
Number of Tentacles: six, three from top of each shoulder
Fighting Style: Quick and Evasive, focusing on dodging and countering with traps
Motivation: Lust
Personality: Cunning and silent, willing to go to any lengths to achieve what he wants.
Human Disguise Appearance: Naturally looks human, apart from tentacles, tail and fangs.
Clothing: One pair of blue jeans (slightly damaged) and a long cape to hide tail and tentacles.
Special Attributes: Unique organ system, with no known heart and brain cells that can be moved through out the body
Distinguishing features: Left eye has the ability to calm any human who looks directly at it, lulling them into a state of relaxation
Capabilities: Large Regeneration factor, almost instantaneous.
Weaknesses: High currents of electricity.
Likes: Sweets and candy
Dislikes: Laborious work
History: Unknown, possible a human mutation deriving from alien exposure.

(This is my first RP, so hope this is good enough. Help greatly appreciated!)
Author:  Darwin [ Mon May 09, 2011 12:21 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Xen, a new monster :p
well, will say he's very bare bones and a little over human for my tastes but, that's usually not too much a problem as long as he's obviously inhuman when he attacks (even though the whole 6' 1" and 120lbs makes him anorexic). you'll also want to say his age and make sure he's at least 18 yrs old

also unknown histories are fine but, you may want to work on that slowly over time

other than that though i'll say welcome to shokushu, and enjoy your stay, and feel free to add more as you play too
Author:  XenKen [ Mon May 09, 2011 12:25 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Xen, a new monster :p
Thank you!
Author:  Madison [ Mon May 09, 2011 12:58 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Xen, a new monster :p
Not very monsterious if you ask me.. Though looking at this bit: "human mutation deriving from alien exposure." makes me wonder "What human exposure to aliens?"

And I'm not really seeing any perticular reason why the character is at Shokushu...
Author:  XenKen [ Mon May 09, 2011 1:02 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Xen, a new monster :p
I have no clue on how to do any of this, I'm completely new at RPing on forums...
Author:  Brittany [ Mon May 09, 2011 1:51 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Xen, a new monster :p
Well, if you're going to play a monster, it would probably be more ideal to follow the theme of the site. I'd ditch the human stuff, and have him be more of an alien. Humanoid alien, sure, but alien enough to not be mistaken for a human. A human disguise is always useful but not mandatory, so that's something to consider. Tentacles are always fun to play with so you got that covered. :)

I suppose the only advice I'd offer you is to make Xen more monstrous, since most students like the thrill of being chased and ravaged by something far from human. :P

Details would also go a long way to fleshing out your character as well, but you got a good start. There's room for improvement though. :) Welcome to Shokushu!
Author:  oozekar [ Mon May 09, 2011 4:38 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Xen, a new monster :p
Yea, we all love delicious detail. The more the better. Welcome to the school!
Author:  PiaM. [ Mon May 09, 2011 6:50 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Xen, a new monster :p
Welcome aboard :)

XenKen wrote:
History: Unknown, possible a human mutation deriving from alien exposure.



Hmmm.. Maybe he originally was a human astronaut, got injuried in an accident, got infected with alien parasites, the parasites helped regrow him, but as they do so, he becomes gradually less human and more alien? Just tossing out a random idea here :D
Author:  Madison [ Mon May 09, 2011 8:00 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Xen, a new monster :p
Thing is, NO monster can't be from Earth...

the Rules Post wrote:
• There are no monsters on Earth. The only intelligent species on that planet are Humans.


So... yeah.
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