Monster Bio/Profile
Name: Rimn
Race: Xirtan,
Place of Birth: Exlone, the only known Xirtan inhabited planet.
Gender: Male
Age: 780 in human years.
Height: 6’
Weight: Varies at will from almost weightless to up to 100 pounds, roughly
Eye Color: No visual organs, relies on picking up electric signals from its environment, allowing it to see in the dark.
Skin Color: Bone white
Skin Texture: Smooth, almost friction-less, allowing for extreme speed.
Hair: None, having long pointed quills sprouting from head instead.
Quill Color: Changes based on emotions, blue when calm and green when upset.
Body Build: Sleek and aerodynamic, not many muscles.
Tail: None
Tentacles: Slender and slick, dark blue in color, made from a special ooze emitted from a glad on its wrist, allowing any number of tentacles based on the situation
Number of Tentacles: Varies.
Wings: Two, Bunches of needle-like fibers that only have massive air-resistance when electricity is run through them, allowing flight.
Wingspan: 8’
Wing Color: White
Cock Size: 11”
# of Cocks: One
Fighting Style: Hiding and evading until the target succumbs to fear.
Motivation: Not known, seems to act without reason
Personality: Not distinguishable
Human Disguise Form: None
Clothing: None
Special Attributes: Emits a silent, odorless vapor into the air that causes feelings of fear and despair in any life for that can inhale it. This feeling of fear varies in strength, ranging from mild panic to paralyzing terror, depending on how much is inhaled into the blood stream. Produces a jelly like substance from the wrists that hardens based on electricity running through the inside of it, forming tentacles and other useful tools.
Distinguishing features: No facial features, entire face is smooth, like a bone mask. Long slender arms which can stretch at will up to 2x normal size.
Behavior: Erratic, seems to operate with no reason
Capabilities: Fear Vapor, adapt at hiding in plain sight,
Weaknesses: Any amount of electricity disrupts the currents its body naturally produces, leaving it prone to attacks.
Likes: Unknown
Dislikes: Unknown
History: A member of an alien race from a distant planet, traveling the universe with no known purpose. Each Xirtan operates alone, with only one per planet, with few exceptions. Not much is know about Rimn himself, although seems to be grasping the concepts of language, being seen able to understand spoken language and read signs. (Xirtans have no forms of communication except for electric pulses sent through the air). Rimn arrived on Shokushu recently, two years and has been in hiding until now, coming out drawn to the presence of large amounts of electricity (N.I.C.E's equipment)
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