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Author: | Aquavitali [ Fri Dec 14, 2012 1:58 am ] | ||
Post subject: | Aqua Vitali - the water of life | ||
My name is Vitalius. I am a water manipulating spirit, some once called me a demon. I was born shortly after the universe was created. I am a male. I began on an asteroid that hurtled through the big bang I already explained my age. I stand at six foot tall, but rarely stand. In full aqua form I am around 200 pounds. Can you not see my piercing sea green eyes, can you not feel them? My skin is dark blue as I am now, comprised of running water. I keep the mirage of hair at long length. I am strong, but not bulky, like a water serpent. I have no tail, tentacles or wings. What an odd question, my penis does as water does, it fills up all available space. When chasing my prey I command the mist to enshroud them, and on stormy nights I can exert some control over the clouds to scare and confuse them. With more dangerous prey i can get close and suffocate them. I enjoy stealing some of the life force from my victim as I desecrate them, making them relive a memory worse than reality. I am stable of mind, but I am not content, water has become tame, whereas I have not. I would love to violate all of my victims in the water, where I can render them unconscious but let them breathe through water manipulation. I like feeling the pain as I manipulate their water based mind to make them relive a delectably horrible memory, I drink their misery and anguish. I have two forms, my water form, which is fairly solid, I have sharp teeth as any water creature should, and angular features, like the humans before time, this form pleases me. In mist form it is hard to keep all of me in a definite shape, the only definite is the glowing green eyes looking through the fog. The only thing signifigant, besides what i have already stated, is the fact that when deep in water i abandon any form to rest. Do I behave? As a lion behaves in the wild. I respect the laws of territory, I give ample warning if you wander into mine. I like to manipulate mortals. I do have powers, I can turn water into mist and fog and inhabit it, I can somewhat direct storms. Mortals are mostly water, their minds are no excerption, and I can slip inside. I of course have weaknesses, electricity and strong winds can harm me, an abundance of plant roots can suck away at my essence, I avoid dry places, but have equal footing with fire. Ice however can stop me, for a time. I tend to forget the outside world when i am manipulating a victim. I like control, over the mind and body. I like visiting the showers and the pool. I dislike dry earth, and strong wind. I was born shortly after the universe. I was merely frozen water on an asteroid until i drifted through the remnants of the big bang. I lived my life taking life corce from aquatic creatures. One day one of the life form of my planet fell in, an old 8 legged insect like creature, and i realized as I sucked its energy i was absorbing knowledge as well, memories. It gave me a hunger i had never felt before, a week later i drowned one of the sentient life fomrs. It was glorious, but i realized that killing left pleasure, but not for long. I experimented, and i found one local technique that worked to prolongue the ecstasy. I would violate my victims. As my hunger grew so did my powers. I gained great control over most forms of water, including storms and fog. I leaked into their cities water supply and was greeted by their head female scientist taking a shower. As I violated her, i learned that the planet was doomed, but there was an alternative, the majority of the civilization was leaving on a ship. After this, I ran through the city's water system i traveled through a tube and was deposited in a tank with a liquid I did not recognize. It got colder, and colder, i was frozen solid in minutes. It became dark. I awoke to a fire, in a puddle on the floor, someone stepped in me and i took advantage of them, it was a pirate! The ship was being raided! I decided to wait And catch a ride on the next pirate to pass, which didnt take very long. Over the next few months, i slowly killed off the crew except for one. Tullius Xindus, an 8 armed life form who pledged allegience in exchange for his life, i happily obliged, and now the Infinite is mine to control. Out of character, umm, this is my first try and my first post here, I hope i can fit in and have a good time with all of you:)
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Author: | Madison [ Fri Dec 14, 2012 2:40 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
No monsters can be from Earth, I'm afraid. |
Author: | Aegir 2 [ Fri Dec 14, 2012 2:49 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
Welcome to Shokushu. |
Author: | Aquavitali [ Fri Dec 14, 2012 2:54 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
Fixed, thank you for pointing that out. Thanks aegir, what do you think? |
Author: | Ancient_Alastor [ Fri Dec 14, 2012 5:06 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
Interestingly enough, some parts of it read like a haiku. Or almost everything reads like a haiku. Also, 'Egypt' and 'Nile' are earth-bound regions, are they not? Guess you'd have to re-tool that... |
Author: | Aquavitali [ Fri Dec 14, 2012 5:23 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
Monsters can never have even been on earth before? I just landed in egypt |
Author: | Madison [ Fri Dec 14, 2012 1:38 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
Shokushu isn't on Earth anyway, so there is no reason for Earth to be involved. |
Author: | Aquavitali [ Fri Dec 14, 2012 11:54 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
Ok i think ive made it better... Not the best start ive got going is there? |
Author: | Momo [ Sat Dec 15, 2012 12:11 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
Welcome! Wouldn't worry about it - many profiles start out that way! - Hope you have fun here |
Author: | Ancient_Alastor [ Sat Dec 15, 2012 12:46 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
Well, stringent measures make for better roleplays, you know. Mine got shot down a bit, and I had to really tweak it in order for them to allow it. It's pretty normal, so don't worry about it. |
Author: | Madison [ Sat Dec 15, 2012 1:27 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
Let's see... still listed as being from Earth.. Yet saying you were born on an asteroid. Stated to be basically older then the actual universe... |
Author: | Aquavitali [ Sat Dec 15, 2012 2:24 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
Fixed that, I get acared of what i did wrong every time I see that red name... Haha but he is pretty old. |
Author: | Madison [ Sat Dec 15, 2012 4:27 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
Ok, looks ok now. Just remember to not hurt the girls here so as to leave injury. |
Author: | Aquavitali [ Sat Dec 15, 2012 5:37 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
Of course not, i manipulate, but no real injury. |
Author: | Ancient_Alastor [ Sat Dec 15, 2012 6:12 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Aqua Vitali - the water of life |
Now I can finally welcome you man. There's plenty of something for you to explore here, so enjoy. Oh, and I still like that you did the whole thing haiku style. |
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