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 The Dark Wolf Giza 
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Post The Dark Wolf Giza
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Name: Giza (Pronounced Guy Zaa)
Race: Werewolf
Place of Birth: N.I.C.E. Labratory
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Height: 7'5
Weight: 250lbs

Eye Color: Yellow
Fur Colour: Black with white higlights under arms legs etc
Tail?: Yes
Tail Length: 3'11"
Tentacles: Yes but only in his demoic wolfen form
Number of Tentacles: 2
Wings: None
Wingspan: None
Wing Color: None
Cock Size: 15"
# of Cocks: 1
Fighting Style: Wolfish fighting style mainly will use what his body as a weapon.
Motivation: He hunts because of his wolf instincts that must be given in to.
Psychological Profile: Cocky and playful Giza likes to play with his food before he fucks it. When the bloodlust hits him he becomes a whole new wolf the demonic evil side of him takes control and he becomes an uncontorlable monster.

Human Disguise Form: Can change back into a human but not for long as his wolfen side is always dominent his human form is know as professor Giza a traveling Doctor at Shokushu ;)
Human Disguise Appearance: Black hair long scruffy and everywhere, can take on the form of a caucasian man wearing a leather jacket and caramel trousers his human form has black scruffy hair and his yellow eyes
Distinguishing features: His eyes which are bright yellow he will wear sunglasses to hide this feature though. If Giza was to smile in his human form you would be able to see his large canines but he try to hide them when talking to his prey.

Behavior: Currious and reckless
Magic/Powers: The full moon gives him power but while helping him it also hinders him making him a mindless animal at the full moon though he can control his wolfy side it can easily beat him if he gets distracted or injured. His saliva has a aphrodisiac effect this allows him to prepare his prey for his attack with a flick of his unaturally long tongue. This causes a mark on the flesh which is the only evidence of his attack. When in His demoic wolf form his tail splits apart grows longer and becomes moist and soft giving him two tentacles, this changes back when he he changes back to Giza. He can also blend easily with the shadows and foliage around Shokushu high. Currently Giza has not experienced the power of the two moons Shokushu has but it's a waiting game and who know what may happen.

Weaknesses: Full Moon, silver of anykind having the same senses as a dog his nose is particulary vernerable to sharp smell and a kick or punch. Also he doesn't like loud or high pitch noises.

Likes: Night, Rivers, The woods and hunting for prey
Dislikes: Morning, Doctors and medical equipment the sea

History: Giza was born in the N.I.C.E. underground research facility. There they were trying to make a super weapon for their army. Giza was this weapon. The combination of Wolfen, Human DNA and demonic magic created Giza. They created a monster just as they had wanted to. As a Child all he knew were the scientist that tested on him and put him through the various trials.

On his 18th birthday the day of a full moon the change hit him. The inocent 18 year old became a fully fledge demoic wolfen beast. Quickly escaping his cell the wolf began to butcher the male staff and rape the women. Exhausted from all the action the wolf slumped to the floor unconscious. Changing back Giza awoke and stumbled about the lab unaware of what he had caused. What was left of the labs security team tranquislised Giza and moved Giza into a stronger wolf proof prison.

Thanks to meditation and excercise these skills were taught to him by N.I.C.E. staff he mangaes to keep his vicious wolfen side incheck. When he showed the Scientists his contol he was released into the Shokushu grounds. Unable to change back to a human as he had wanted for more than a few hour Giza is stuck hunting the girls here at the school to satisfy his wolfen desires.

He wears the chain around his neck to remind that what is inside him must stay there. The chain acts as an anchor to keep the demonic magic inside him if it was unleashed without a leash he would lose control. The chain allows him to rein in the demonic side of him after it has exhausted itself and trap it again. It lets him control the demonic energy instead of it controling him.


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Sun Mar 13, 2011 3:36 pm
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Post Re: The Dark Wolf Giza
Cool profile you got here, Giza! :D

Just one thing I'd like to point out. Shokushu Island isn't on Earth itself, so it's impossible for the helicopter transporting him to have crashed near the island. -nods-

But apart from that, I didn't see any other problems. :D So excellent work again, Giza.

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Thanks i'll probably do some changes here and there were i fancy it.

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Sun Mar 13, 2011 4:05 pm
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Welcome!

Perhaps instead of a helicopter crash, the people from the NICE labs took charge of him?

If you forgive me for nitpicking, I think I found a minor typo:

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On his 18th birthday the day of a full moon the change hit him. The incoent 16 year old became a full fledge wolfen beast.

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thanks for the heads up changed the problem should have really double checked it my bad :)

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Post Re: The Dark Wolf Giza
NICE doesn't have any presence on Earth, I'm afraid. Only thing they got is the platform.

Speaking of... there arn't any monsters from Earth.

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Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:54 pm
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Something I noticed: "10Kg?"

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Post Re: The Dark Wolf Giza
1 kg is only about 2.2 lbs, so your monster currently weighs only 13.2 lbs. You might want to change this.

(Since you've given his height in feet and inches, you should probably give his weight in pounds anyway, just for consistency.)

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thanks for that i'm working in british weight my bad :(

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13.2 lbs is ridiculously light for a creature his size. I'd expect a weight closer to 250 lbs.

Also, his tail would be about 3'11", converting from metric.

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Thanks for the help or pointers updated my bio so far. If theres anything that needs to be changed or you notice looks wrong tell me please thanks :)

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I wonder how he'd react to Shokushu's second moon...

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Second moon? That's strange...I've been here for several years now, and I've never seen any mention of a second moon anywhere on the boards... :? Hmmm, I must've overlooked it somehow...

Anyhoo...Welcome to the boards, Giza, hope to have my students run into your monster sometime in the near future... :D

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Post Re: The Dark Wolf Giza
That's because it hugs the horizon, and is usually blocked by the mountain range.

http://shokushu.com/out/space01.html

The second moon is mentioned here.

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