The new, shy student, Sinni.
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Sinni9
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The new, shy student, Sinni.
Name: Sinni Yuko. Gender: Female. Age: 18. Place of Birth: Chicago, Illinois. Nationality: American. Hair Color: Black. Eye Color: Brown. Ethnicity: Japanese/Italian. Mostly Japanese. Skin Tone: light tan. Pubic Hair: Shaven. Distinguishing features: Height: 5'6. Weight: 120 lbs. Bust: 36C. Waist: 26 inches. Hips: 37 inches. Background: Psychological Profile: Personality: Shy, kind, gentle. Virgin? Yes. Piercing or Tattoos: Never. Language: English. Likes: Anime, video games, reading, relaxing with friends, misc. sports. Activities: Soccer, tennis, badminton, swimming. Background: Growing up in a fairly wealthy family, Sinni was used to be sheltered and having opportunities opened up for her. Problem was, she didn't like the thought of taking whatever she wanted. She was humble. Because of her families wealth, she got some of the best education in the world. Her family was rich from the real estate business done by her mother, and a highly known security company made by her father. Because both parents were always off, she lived mainly in boarding schools. After years of keeping her grades up, her parents finally sent her to the mysterious school known as Shokushu High. Magic? With the help from the school nurse, she is able to recreate her hymen. Literally, recreate her virginity.
Last edited by Sinni9 on Wed Aug 17, 2011 9:21 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Sinni9
Joined: Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:51 pm Posts: 13
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
This was my first skeleton, so I hope I did it right. I would appreciate feed back.
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alexvano
Joined: Sun Apr 03, 2011 4:49 am Posts: 2137
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
Welcome to shokushu, seems done right, but may want to add some background to make the character more interesting.
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Sat Aug 13, 2011 7:37 am |
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PiaM.
Joined: Mon Feb 23, 2009 9:09 pm Posts: 3942 Location: On a very scary island.
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
Welcome aboard! As Alexanvo mentioned, a little bit about her background would be nice.
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Sat Aug 13, 2011 7:55 pm |
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Madison
Joined: Wed May 09, 2007 2:07 am Posts: 2014 Location: *Classified*
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
Yeah, we'd need a background here.
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Sat Aug 13, 2011 10:51 pm |
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Sinni9
Joined: Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:51 pm Posts: 13
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
I hope that works...sorry for the delay...
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Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:16 pm |
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PiaM.
Joined: Mon Feb 23, 2009 9:09 pm Posts: 3942 Location: On a very scary island.
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
I think I get a better idea of your character already Basically, she is an upper class girl, but one that is not stuck up about it, right? Makes me wonder a bit how she got so shy and gentle.. Was she just born that way, or did her parents financial success catapult her to social circles were she just did not feel at home? Or did her parents perhaps make extra sure they did not raise her to be a snob? Just a few questions, you don't need to answer them Anyway, not mandatory or anything, but if you can find a picture that you think represents your girl, I find one often help a lot in making a character stand out for your partner. Just a tip
_________________ Pia Marie Hov - Sophomore, just realizing how much trouble she is in.
The Shokushu Pixies
Striktor, undead pirate.
Astrid, red scarf of the Tramps.
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Sun Aug 14, 2011 8:37 pm |
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Sinni9
Joined: Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:51 pm Posts: 13
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
PiaM. wrote: I think I get a better idea of your character already Basically, she is an upper class girl, but one that is not stuck up about it, right? Makes me wonder a bit how she got so shy and gentle.. Was she just born that way, or did her parents financial success catapult her to social circles were she just did not feel at home? Or did her parents perhaps make extra sure they did not raise her to be a snob? Just a few questions, you don't need to answer them Anyway, not mandatory or anything, but if you can find a picture that you think represents your girl, I find one often help a lot in making a character stand out for your partner. Just a tip Well, her parents weren't around much so when they were around, they were usually talking on phones and conducting business. Because of that, she became...inclusive? I think that's the word. Also, you are right about the social circles. She was just born a timid girl, and when faced with the groups of kids of her high class, she didn't like it at all. I hope that helps. I do have a picture. Do I just post the link?
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Sun Aug 14, 2011 8:43 pm |
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PiaM.
Joined: Mon Feb 23, 2009 9:09 pm Posts: 3942 Location: On a very scary island.
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
There is a button for linking pictures when making a post. You can also paste the link, then put either [img ][/img ] or [ url][/url ] around it, just without the extra spaces. If it fits, you might also use it as an avatar.
_________________ Pia Marie Hov - Sophomore, just realizing how much trouble she is in.
The Shokushu Pixies
Striktor, undead pirate.
Astrid, red scarf of the Tramps.
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Sun Aug 14, 2011 9:00 pm |
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Sinni9
Joined: Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:51 pm Posts: 13
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
Thank you. SinniLike that?
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Sun Aug 14, 2011 9:03 pm |
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Sinni9
Joined: Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:51 pm Posts: 13
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
I can get another, but this is just the common one I like to use.
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Sun Aug 14, 2011 9:04 pm |
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Forny
Joined: Sun Mar 08, 2009 1:25 am Posts: 2337 Location: The Furthest Reaches of the Imagination
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
You could also put it in as [ url=http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1184249]Insert Words[/url ] if you want to show the link without showing the url. Totally up to you. Cool character so far, by the way. Cool picture as well. -drools-
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Sun Aug 14, 2011 9:06 pm |
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AndyB2183
Joined: Tue May 04, 2010 6:28 am Posts: 881 Location: Somewhere in Southeast Asia
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
Interesting, you have the bare bones of a character design, but she surely looks interesting. You can be sure that Edward will definitely pay her a visit if she decides to venture into the wild outdoors of Shokushu's woods and beaches.
Anyway, welcome to Shokushu!
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Mon Aug 15, 2011 1:07 am |
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PiaM.
Joined: Mon Feb 23, 2009 9:09 pm Posts: 3942 Location: On a very scary island.
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
Cute picture. I am sure that collar will put all sorts of naughty ideas into the heads of monsters (and possibly a few of the students).
_________________ Pia Marie Hov - Sophomore, just realizing how much trouble she is in.
The Shokushu Pixies
Striktor, undead pirate.
Astrid, red scarf of the Tramps.
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Mon Aug 15, 2011 5:48 am |
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alexvano
Joined: Sun Apr 03, 2011 4:49 am Posts: 2137
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Re: The new, shy student, Sinni.
Lol collaring a student what evil being would want to do that pia? =}
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