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 A quiet moment of prayer goes horribly wrong. (For niellwyn) 
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Claire awoke the day after her arrival at the school, sore and aching all over her body. What had happened? Had she fallen down a staircase or something? But where were the bruises? And why did she feel funny...down there?

She groaned as she sat up in bed, looking down at her long white nightgown in confusion. Had she put this on last night? One hand went to the side of her head, the other rising unbidden to her mouth, her teeth biting down on the index finger gently. Claire winced and pulled her hand away, looking at the bite mark on her hand, just starting to heal. When had she done that?

Shaking her head groggily, she turned and set her feet on the ground, elbows going onto her knees in morning prayer.

Today was Sunday. Even though she had only been here for one day, and she should really be getting familiar with her class schedule, she couldn't help but think she needed to go to church.

Groaning slightly as she stood up, gown falling to pool around her feet, Claire shivered as a chill ran down her spine. She looked down, shocked to see her underwear was gone!

She frantically dashed to her chest of drawers, pulling out a pair of white cotton panties and a matching bra hastily. She strapped the too small bra on with a deep inhalation, pressing her breasts down to make them less obtrusive.

"To flaunt your body, is to call down evil upon you. So sayeth the Lord. Amen"

As she bent over to pull on her underwear, her long brown hair fell over her shoulder to slide along her arm. The sensation made Claire shudder for some reason, but she put it out of her mind as she squirmed slightly, pullng out the waistband of her panties to settle them on her hips. Oww, was it that time of the month already? She was so sore...

Taking a long dark blue dress from the drawer, she settled it down over her shoulders, buttoning up the collar to the neck as the drape of it fell down to her ankles. Turning to the bed, she picked up her headband, settling her hair underneath it carefully, before winding her rosary around her small pale wrist.

She got her sandles out of her suitcase and headed for the door, hoping to find directions to a chapel. She thought she'd seen one as they were landing the plane.

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Claire soon got directions from her floor's RA, thanking the girl quietly as she left the building. She walked down the sandy path, lost in thought, her fingers absently rollng the beads of the rosary around her left wrist.

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The path was nearly abandoned, overgrown with a fecundity of grasses and creeping shoots. Few footprints lay within the narrow track. Only a few students could be seen up and about; dressed in their uniforms on their way to rare Sunday classes. As early as it was the hills hadn't lost their nocturnal sheen of dew to the sun, which peeked over the ocean's darkened bands far off on the horizon.

Claire found her chapel in an isolated clearing in the jungle oddly removed from the usual clutter of buildings on campus. Brushing aside blooming tendrils that draped across the path and approaching the door, she heard nothing but the exotic chatter and squawk from the forest's recesses. Morning sunlight polished the ornate brass handles on the tall double doors. Taking these in hand it opened reluctantly, so that she had to dig her heels onto the cracked stone stoop and lean back on her handhold to gain access. Her reverent steps echoed on the marble of the threshold.

Inside, the church was as desolate as without. Empty pews rowed themselves humbly before the altar. An empty aisle led to the front, where a tortured bronze Christ groaned petulantly on a gigantic and recently polished Cross. Unoccupied as the cramped space was, everything was kept in perfect order. The altarcloth was spotless as a young lamb, bedecked with pristine beeswax tapers whose flames shone unwaveringly. The Stations of the Cross were well marked, the pews dusted and shining. The doves themselves--fluttering in the vaulted rafters--maintained a sense of kept well being, fat and clean white.

"Young Miss." intruded a hidden voice from the shadows of the far wall. The words, elderly and stern, belonged to a shuffling priest who scuffed his way before the preacher's rigid podium. His saltpeter hair was tonsured in the manner of a monk's, but his wardrobe was mre modern; a simple black suit and white collar. Half moon spectacles perched below his ponderous brow, steel rims framing a pointed black stare. A grave scowl contorted his lumpy, pasty features. "You wouldn't happen to be here for services, would you?" He smoothed his hands over the podium's surface, rumbling thoughtfully back in his throat. No matter how he searched the pews behind the girl he saw only the same loneliness as before. Sighing and peering wryly up at heaven, he came around the wooden stand to approach Claire.

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Claire curtsied to the priest respectfully, wincing a bit from the ache in her hips.

"Oh, yes Father. I couldn't possibly miss a Sunday at church."

Claire relaxed, her nagging fears about what was wrong with her fading in the familiar scent of burning candles and old wood. She smiled brightly, looking about the old church as peace settled again over her heart. The cooing of the doves was a welcome touch, one she was not used to in a church, but that seemed fitting given the location of the chapel. The emptiness of the church worried her slightly.

Were none of the other girls even slightly devout? Was she going to be thought a freak for bothering to come here?

Claire decided it didn't matter if she attended the services alone. Her faith was her own, and the priest must share it strongly to still take such loving care of the chapel, if it saw such little use.

She smoothed her dress out neatly, the rosary around her wrist glinting in the candle light. She hoped to make a good impression on the elderly man of the cloth, especially if he was the only one residing on the island.

"This chapel is beautiful Father. Do you take care of it by yourself?"

As she asked the question, Claire found her eyes drawn to the bronze statue of Christ, a feeling of contentment washing over her.

This is where I belong. Thank you Lord, for letting me find this place, so that I might give You worship in Your house.

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"Myself?" he wiggled his jowls humbly. "Oh no no young Miss. I couldn't possibly. But I am blessed enough to have the help of a couple of nuns, as well as the occcassional volunteer student I do have to give them some credit." Folding his hands before him he turned toward the rightmost wall to gaze upon the stained glass image of the Madonna. The window's sharply angled colored lay spread out over the pews where the sunlight spilled through.

"Well then young lady, take your seat if you would. It looks like it's just you and I this morning." Of course Claire obeys in the house of God, and the priest makes his haggard way behind the podium to begin morning Mass. "In nomine patris, et fili, et spiritu sancti.." he began in the ancient call to the Trinity. His sermon plodded on, delivered as strongly as though he had his full audience. Pious and eager as the old man was, the might of his voice and message could not cover the chapel's true emptiness, but only seemed to accent it. He delivered his last words with a downtrodden sigh and led his solitary parishioner into prayer.

Dove's fluttered irreverently overhead, bringing the good Father out of his enjoinder to the Lord. Seeing the young Claire undisturbed he leaves her to her devotions and exits through the same door that he first appeared from. Alone in her seat, she heard a strange thing. A scratching, papery and wet, intruded on her awareness. The sound seemed to stem from the stained glass window. A second noise joined the first, like that of stressed metal bending, a drawn out creak. A quick glance reveals the shadows of the leaves outside beating and scraping on the exterior glass; nonething to concern oneself about, but the creaking could not be so easily explained. The shining Virgin frowned at her. And then, a single, glass tear appeared at the corner of her eye and slipped down her cheek and neck beneath her robes!

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Claire was enraptured throughout the entire service, not even noticing after a few minutes that she was the only one in the room aside from the elderly priest.

He is an excellent preacher! I'm so thankful to have such a priest here. Maybe this won't be such a bad school after all.

She followed along with the Latin prayers word for word, her grasp of the language and nuance perfected from years of devotion. The fears she had melted away under the warm glow of familiarity.

When the old priest called for a time of silent prayer, Claire grasped her rosary firmly in both hands, cross dangling in front of her lips as she prayed to her Lord and Creator.

Thank you God for putting this priest here. You have blessed him with a strength of conviction that shines like the sun in my eyes. Thank you for giving me an escape from that empty house, with all of it's memories of mama and papa. Lord, the only thing I ask...is please...help me not be afraid of these strange feelings I wake up with. Please give me the courage to push through whatever this is and make a new life for myself here. Forever your faithful and humble servant, Amen.

Claire raised her head, blinking as she realised the priest had gone. She turned her head in confusion at the strange noise echoing through the room.

What is that?

Her eyes were drawn to the stained glass Virgin, widening as they saw the lifeles features turn down in a frown. She gasped as a glassy tear trickled down the Holy Mother's face.

Was she witnessing a miracle?! Had God favored her with a sign?!

Her heart began to beat like a drum as she rose and slowly walked to the window, hands clasped around the rosary in her grasp still in the position of prayer.

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The Virgin loomed before Claire, it's image shining like a thousand interlocking jewels. The halo around the Madonna's head was fileld with sunlight, shedding liquid gold over her lapis lazuli robes. The brilliance drowned out the black lead lines, leaving only the colors of the window. Every detail scintillated in the glorious light. Her robes, they were fluttering! Mary's forlorn visage looked down upon the awed young girl imploringly. Miraculously, her glass hand reached up and beckoned.

Claire couldn't disobey such a clear sign. Walking toward the living icon, mantled in her golden aura, she barely felt her feet move, captivated by the sacred omen. Come the Virgin mouthed. Her arms spread wide to receive her. Then, as Claire reached the window and extended her figners to touch the glass, the glass froze stiff. The instant her fingers touched the hot, waved surface the Virgin's countenance broke in a snarl. A shrill, scraping screech like dragging nails erupted as though from Mary mouth, suddenly twisted in a vulgar mockery of her former benevolence. Her halo rippled as red as gore. Torn robes clad her, nearly naked, her eyes yellow and shrieking lips parted to show dirty fangs! Her hands formed claws and she seemed to leap out at Claire, shattering apart. Flurries of glittering, rainbow color showered her, cutting the skin of her arms and face as the trees broke through and grasped at her shirt. Wooden talons pierced her dress and hooked into her bodice. Twigs snarled her hair and drove savagely at her brow. the wind buffeted at her, throwing bright shards through the thorny thickets.

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Claire shrieked as the Holy Mother exploded into a cloud of sharp glass. She covered her face and clenched shut her eyes as the razor pieces buffeted her. As the branches took hold of her clothes and hair she yelped again, twisting and fighting, trying to break free of the entangling limbs.

What had happened? Had she angered God somehow? What was happening?

*Blood stained her dress and streaked her skin, her bodice ripping to expose her white bra. Her hair became tangled in the limb, Claire cried out with each twist to try to get away.*

"Help! Please help me! Someone, anyone! Oh God, please!"

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Ferociously the trees attacked, reaching out with gnarled fingers, tearing and grasping. Her shoes slid in the fallen glass, and the word spun backward as Claire lost in balance. The beastly foliage caught her, pulling her bra in half so that it hung limply on either side of the gorgeous swell of her breasts, the creamy skin dotted with blood from numerous scratches. Clawing at her, they hoisted her upright despite her terrified struggle.

Salvation came in the form of glazed, ceramic hands. They pulled her away firmly, their palms cool and unyielding. It was the statues, the icons of the saints, carrying her to freedom. The trees screeched their anger against the shards of lead and glass, but the Saints snatched at the twigs and broke them in their stony grasps. With the sound of wood splintering behind her, Claire felt herself lofted by the placid faced idols. Born past the pews and into the aisle, they turned, proceeding with their frightened charge up to the altar and the grim crucifix and the agonized Christ.

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