The Morkazim is a multi-beings formed of a multitude of energized nano-particles.

State: Solidio/plasmic

Height: 5' 10" - 6' depending on energy level

Race: one of a collective of plasma beings which reside in a sud-dimension bordering on the normal one

Place of Origin: Accreated out of the sub-etha during an electrical storm over N.I.C.E. labs. This was an accidental byproduct of an experiment being preformed within, and the lab was unaware of the event.

Age: total time spent as a single sentient being is roughly 6 weeks prior time spent in original plane is incalculable.

Gender: Cannot be determined. Form is vaguely feminine

Personality: Somewhat moody and frequently sad. Very communal creature, enjoys being surrounded by other beings.

Abilities: Due to its composition, the Morkazim can phase freely through walls and most other forms of solid matter, or merge with them to hide its presence. Can also project electrical energies up to 7' from main body and animate certain inanimate objects for brief periods. able to merge with living organisms and affect their subconscious. as a last resort can drain the bio-electricity from a opponents nervous system, rendering them unconscious. can also split into multiple copies of self, however takes large amounts of energy and is not used often.

Body description: Roughly humanoid, glowing with primordial energies and encased within a suit of metallic armor. Two arms and a several segmented tentacles extending from the back of its shoulders. tentacles end in three prongs which can be used as extra hands. Lacks feet or legs, is suspended off the ground by a swirling pillar of energy.

Modus operandi: Moves through surroundings before swiftly merging with target and stimulating her nervous system with electric impulses until climax, thereby releasing large amounts of bio-energy. often uses subtlety when attacking as fear 'sours' its victims energies. after attacks victims often feel a need for close companionship. the feeling passes with time

Speech: Lacking a material being, vocal speech is problematic. Can ,however, imprint its thoughts into surrounding consciousnesses-short range telepathy.

Strengths: relatively immune to physical harm or containment.

Weaknesses: Can be discorporated by intense electrical stimulation, does not fair well in water or against insulating materials. As its prior life was within a immense swarm of its fellows it is mortally afraid of being alone for extended periods of time.

Likes: large crowds, bio-electricity, stimulating female humans

Dislikes: Water, rubber, and being alone

Motivation for staying in/near Shokushu: Is attached to the area as its place of 'birth' and believes it will be able to return to its original plane if it can accumulate sufficient bio-energy from the human within the school. Also afraid of moving away from the other lifeforms on the island, fearing that it will become trapped over the ocean all alone.

Recent History: After its arrival at SHS, Morkazim spent several weeks observing the various lifeforms around it. In doing so it has gathered data on several of the inhabitants of the island and has begun to interact with them. lack of experience has kept its approach rather clumsy however.

Light shines forth
Matter aggregates
Eyes appear
A being pours forth from the Planes

"We are here..."

You are waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyy off from making an acceptable profile. Now go and actually make one before you come back.

i only joined a couple mins ago on working on it now


edit : this better?
pic is borrowed from the starcraft 2 site

*nods* You really need to come up with some sort of description for your monster. For example: What does it look like?? What's it history?? What are its motives?
Its great that you've become a monster but we need some sort of information about your monster so that players know how to react and interact with it in scenes.

Don't worry, you're off to a good start now ^^ Very interesting monster. Can it speak? Does it have any connections to N.I.C.E. aside from being "born" near it?

Anyway, welcome to the campus! I'm sure you'll have plenty of opportunities to collect bio-energy around here X3

Now that's a lot more acceptable.

For future reference, first make the profile in Word or Notepad or some other similar program before you make the thread. Otherwise, it really looks like you are spamming, and we don't take kind to that.

sorry