Hi my name is brenden im new to this site and this is my first time creating a monster so any feed back is greatly apreciated

thanking you in advance
regards brenden

Monster Bio/Profile

Name: Altermeous The Unfeathered
Race: Wraith
Type: Geneticily created wraith/ Humanoid apperance
Place of Birth: Subject Testing Space Station 03
Gender: Male
Nationality: Australian
Age: 258
Height: 5ft 6
Weight: 165 lbs
Eye Color: Blue
Skin Color: Purple
Skin Texture: Scaley
Hair? None
Hair Color:
Body Build: Athletic
Tail? Yes
Tail Length: 15f
Tentacles? Yes
Number of Tentacles: 21
Wings? No
Wingspan:
Wing Color:
Cock Size: 10f
# of Cocks: 4
Fighting Style: Ninjutsu
Motivation: world Domination
Psychological Profile: Slightly unstable: Ever since he was a child he was afraid of ghosts and aliens but now
as he has become one his mind is divided between his wraith appearance and his previous human memories from when he
was human.Due to that fact his mind isn't quite coping with the fact that he has become something he feared all his life.
Personality: Charming,Friendly,Good natured but escentric
Sexual Oddities:
Human Disguise Form? Adult male
Human Disguise Appearance: Maths teacher (to lure victims)
Clothing: Jeans,White polo shirt with tie and reading glasses
Special Attributes:
Distinguishing features: slight limp (when disguise is wearing off) purple scales near his neck nad forearms (claimes they are burns)
Behavior: Sadistic
Capabilities: ghostwalk,copycat,false image,multiply
Weaknesses: fire,ice,certain types of bullets e.g uv etc..
Likes: girls,nature(in previous life)
Dislikes: agents,soilders,other aliens cramping his style
History: A australian named alterof who was renowned for the expermintation of aniamals and humans turning them into outlandish fiends but during a experiment on turning a human into a wraith the experiment backfired killing him and all his subjects in a fireball and leaving his old lab but a crater in the ground.
When he awoke he found himself in the space station he and is colleuges built to trap alien creatures for his experiments but instead it was himself in the testing area heavly mutated to the point of being unrecongnisable to his colleuges whom he killed one by one save for the 5 remaining female scientists.
Due to being mentally unstable he locked each one of the five females separtly in each of the holding rooms for later use.
During his later uses with the women he noticed that he was changing in both appearance and seuxual desires he started to learn that he could more pleasure out of the women if he instered his newly formed tentacles into their holes as well as his multiple penises whilst restraing them with his remaining appendages.
It didn't take long for him to develop a appetite for this wanton desregard for his captives saftey so he traveled around the world using his powers to intice women of all ages into a illusion of saftey before raping them with his appendages.
After travaling all over the globe he found that he wasen't completly satisfied with what he had done until he found out shoukusu and the N.I.C.E labs so he decided he would pay them a visit using his powers to transform himself into a exchange teacher he made his way to the school....

story to be continued...........
Miscellaneous: Minions:

Minion1:Dreagan the shapeshifter:

Also known as the lost child this devious creature takes the form of a female student to manipilte the women into a false sense of security by saying that "she can't find her father"
and so lures the unsuspecting woman into altermeous's trap.

Daxious the torturer:

This creature takes over from where Dregan left off further luring the unuspecting girl to her envental doom but before he does he injects the victim with a drug that makes the victim's
arms and legs next to useless as well as keeping them well awake for the duration of the ordeal.