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 Young, Sweet, And not so innocent? 
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Post Young, Sweet, And not so innocent?
Hi Everyone, I'm new here. Here is my chracter, I guess:

Physical appearance:
Hikari Omo is a young woman at about age 19-20. She has long blonde She is a third-degree blackbelt in tai kwon do, which she felt so inclined to take after her father began drinking before going to prison, and a fifth degree in talking, Hikari is a girl not to be messed with. That is, by other humans...

Name: Hikari Omo
Gender: Female
Age: 18-19
Place of Birth: Unknown
Nationality: Errrmm.. American
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Blue
Ethnicity: caucasion
Skin Tone: very fair
Pubic Hair: very little, light and wispy
Distinguishing features: Sparkling eyes, winning smile
Height: 5' 1"
Weight: never ask..
Background: Ill-fitted to this young girls personality, her mother and siblings are constantly worrying about the former-rebel, (Having religious parents, so she was quite a bad girl with sneaking out, spray-painting and dating people she wasn't supposed to. Though strangely, with a clean police record. But that might have to do with that she burnt it...) which usually complicates her social life.
Personality: Hikari Omo is a young student of the Shokushu High School who is very quiet, though once one finds there way to the fire of her heart, is a pure chatterbox. She vows to never be held down by the bounds of love, or any other bounds, for that matter.
Virgin? Yes
Piercing or Tattoos: none
Language: english
Likes: Almost everything...
Activities:
Miscellaneous: She is a third-degree blackbelt in tai kwon do, which she felt so inclined to take after her father began drinking before going to prison, and a fifth degree in talking, Hikari is a girl not to be messed with. That is, by other humans...

Magic? none


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Fri Apr 24, 2009 1:06 am
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Post Re: Young, Sweet, And not so innocent?
A very original character from the looks of it, but might I ask that you continue expanding on your thoughts? Some more specific information such as her age, a longer background (why is she a rebel? Is there a reason she felt she needed to take Tai Kwon Do lessons [which, by the way, is weakened due to the inhibitors on the planet *shakes in anger* Curse you N.I.C.E labs. Moving on..]?). Perhaps her name would be helpful? On top of all that you've pretty much got her covered. If you have anything else you'd like to ask me, either await my reply or throw me a pm. I don't mind helping!

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Post Re: Young, Sweet, And not so innocent?
Yeah...we're going to need a bit more information. Especally how old your character is.

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Fri Apr 24, 2009 3:00 am
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Post Re: Young, Sweet, And not so innocent?
Diana Varnia wrote:
A very original character from the looks of it, but might I ask that you continue expanding on your thoughts? Some more specific information such as her age, a longer background (why is she a rebel? Is there a reason she felt she needed to take Tai Kwon Do lessons [which, by the way, is weakened due to the inhibitors on the planet *shakes in anger* Curse you N.I.C.E labs. Moving on..]?). Perhaps her name would be helpful? On top of all that you've pretty much got her covered. If you have anything else you'd like to ask me, either await my reply or throw me a pm. I don't mind helping!



Alright, thanks for the suggestions, I'll edit it now ^_^ But I do give a name, Hikari.

After editing...
Do you beleive that is better?

After Editing again...
What the heck is pming?


Sat Apr 25, 2009 1:28 am
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Post Re: Young, Sweet, And not so innocent?
SoR: That pming stands for private messaging. There is a little button that will say PM within the information field beneath their avatar.

Oh and good luck! :D

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Sat Apr 25, 2009 6:02 am
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Post Re: Young, Sweet, And not so innocent?
Well it seems you need alot of help here friend and here a link to help you make it easy for the rest of us to understand more about your character

Monster, Student, ADD Agent Bio Format

So please follow this link, a good profile tends to bring in more people for an rp.

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Sat Apr 25, 2009 10:09 am
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Post Re: Young, Sweet, And not so innocent?
OMG THANK YOU!! I have been looking for that a long time. Like a looong time. I could hug you right now, but that would be weird.


Sat Apr 25, 2009 12:12 pm
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Post Re: Young, Sweet, And not so innocent?
Not on this site, it wouldn't. I hope that does help you (I haven't been able to find it myself, either).

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Post Re: Young, Sweet, And not so innocent?
So many tasty women, so little time... welcome, welcome. :D

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Post Re: Young, Sweet, And not so innocent?
thanks... I think?

Hey, just a quick question. Would any of you mind starting an Rp with me? I'm not really sure how to go about it...
If any of you are stupid enough to say yes-
please excuse my ,like, five-year-old writing skills, they suck, I am aware of that.


Thu May 07, 2009 12:26 am
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Post Re: Young, Sweet, And not so innocent?
Uhm, well, if you want to find a role play, you can either scout the boards, find a monster or girl you like and send them a personal message or you can post in the "Searching for a Partner" thread. (Sorry this took so long to post! You prolly don't even need it any more)

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Post Re: Young, Sweet, And not so innocent?
Yea, I don't need it anymore. Karzak Pm'ed me.


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