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 Sakara the escaped morrel slave 
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Post Re: Sakara the escaped morrel slave
two sides? if their are any problems I am prepared to make slight changes

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Thu May 21, 2009 2:10 am
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Post Re: Sakara the escaped morrel slave
Given the change in weight etc a transformation takes place but there's no indication why, how or when.


Thu May 21, 2009 3:15 pm
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Post Re: Sakara the escaped morrel slave
the morrel is a fantasy creature in my novel, I am only using its human form here, but put the discription of the morrel beast form here to give some back ground and share my creation... if it is a problem I will fix it

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Ever feel like someone is watching you... well they are... and someone is watching them... and someone is watching them... and someone is watching them... and someone is watching them... and I am watching them^^

So if you think about it...I am watching you^^

katy: http://shokushu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=1&t=3840
tex: http://shokushu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=3844
Saky: http://shokushu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=30&t=5204


Thu May 21, 2009 8:31 pm
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Post Re: Sakara the escaped morrel slave
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habilon wrote:
the morrel is a fantasy creature in my novel, I am only using its human form here, but put the discription of the morrel beast form here to give some back ground and share my creation... if it is a problem I will fix it


If she's always going to look like a human, why not just make her a human?


Fri May 22, 2009 3:07 am
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Post Re: Sakara the escaped morrel slave
creativity... I just thought it would be nice, I will change it so there is less confusion... I will do so soon

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Ever feel like someone is watching you... well they are... and someone is watching them... and someone is watching them... and someone is watching them... and someone is watching them... and I am watching them^^

So if you think about it...I am watching you^^

katy: http://shokushu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=1&t=3840
tex: http://shokushu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=3844
Saky: http://shokushu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=30&t=5204


Fri May 22, 2009 4:17 am
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notice

i have made major changes to saky now, including taking away the more animal like form.

the changes are brought about due to changes i made in the actualy species for my novels and rps

(and in acordance to the fact that i have to admit that the original profile was a bit silly and unrealistic... i am currently still working on making the morrel species more realistic, as a bit of irony, my original morrel was able to walk on water, the new morrel is now unable to even swim due to the fact that the fur makes it almost impossible for a morrel to create drag in water allowing them to swim)

if anyone sees something that could use some work please do tell me, i am more open to constructive critisism then i was when i first made this profile

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Ever feel like someone is watching you... well they are... and someone is watching them... and someone is watching them... and someone is watching them... and someone is watching them... and I am watching them^^

So if you think about it...I am watching you^^

katy: http://shokushu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=1&t=3840
tex: http://shokushu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=3844
Saky: http://shokushu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=30&t=5204


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