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gguy123
Joined: Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:27 am Posts: 329
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Experiment 13
-=EXPERIMENT FILE: 13=-
Name:
13 or Skwel
Race:
Gelatinous tentacle creature
Type:
Shapeshifter
Place of Birth:
Test tube
Gender:
Male
Nationality:
None
Age:
21
Height:
Varies
Weight:
unknown
Eye Color: Depends on shape (reg: One huge squid-like eye)
Skin Color:
Transparent blue (varies with form)
Skin Texture:
smooth
Hair?
Depends on form
Hair Color:
Brown
Body Build:
Gelatinous
Tail? No
Tentacles? Yes, in reg form
Number of Tentacles: 15
Wings?
No
Cock Size: 6'*2"
# of Cocks: 15 in reg form
Fighting Style: Flailing of limbs, depending on form.
Motivation: revenge
Psychological Profile: He's a bit aggressive with authorities, feeling like they are all after him. He's escaped from an ADD raid after all.
Personality: He's silent, but rash, and constantly lets his attention waver.
Sexual Oddities: Can exude anphrodiasic from tentacle in normal form, and cums alot. After cumming once (takes a while), he's practically spent.
Human Disguise Form? Yes, but form depends
Special Attributes: Can change form
Distinguishing features: The smoothness of his skin and one eye always remain yellow
Behavior: He's a loner, but really likes a good bang.
Capabilities: He can turn into a number of things, as long as he's seen it.
Weaknesses: He has trouble moving once he comes, and he's always clueless.
Likes: Sex with hot ladies (who doesn't)
Dislikes: The ADD, seeing as they almost killed him along with all of his brothers two weeks after he was created.
Last edited by gguy123 on Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:57 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:40 am |
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The Count Alucard
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:24 pm Posts: 2619 Location: In the imagination of an otherwise boring guy...
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What's it out to get revenge on? Or have you just not put up the other details yet?
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Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:44 am |
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Terasmus
Joined: Tue Jul 10, 2007 6:46 pm Posts: 143
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It could use some more details.
Victims are very interested in knowing what they are getting ravaged by. If they don't have any discernable.detail in their monster. Then it's kinda a blank. Just include abit more details as to your motivations.
Check out some other monster profiles for abit of help and insight if you are having trouble. I mean... I am interested in your monster. But I don't get any real discernable detail or any visualization with so many blanks.
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Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:48 am |
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The Count Alucard
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:24 pm Posts: 2619 Location: In the imagination of an otherwise boring guy...
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Right. I mean, sure, your creature was born in a test tube, but was it 10,000 years ago by ancient, hyper-advanced scientists, or just yesterday, on accident, at the science lab? Know what I mean?
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Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:57 am |
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gguy123
Joined: Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:27 am Posts: 329
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Um, I posted by mistake, I editted it now.
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Mon Jul 16, 2007 1:58 am |
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The Count Alucard
Joined: Wed May 02, 2007 10:24 pm Posts: 2619 Location: In the imagination of an otherwise boring guy...
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Thanks for clarifying. Welcome!
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Mon Jul 16, 2007 2:48 am |
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