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 Some poetry I have wrote up... 
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Get Out Of My Head
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I feel abused
I feel like I'm a toy
I feel used
I no longer feel joy

Get out of my head
And leave me in peace

Tears well in my eyes
Everything is in a blur
And I'm stuck on a thin sheet of ice
Now I must concur

Get out of my head
And just leave me be

Please set me free
And just get out of my head.

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*sigh*


Tue Jul 17, 2007 4:29 am
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One more...

Termination
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Revenge is on my mind
Soon there won't be enough time
Everything seems so bleak
And my anger seems to have reached it's peak

Termination
Wells from deep in my soul
Termination
Soon I'm gonna lose all control

Hate can be used as a wonderful tool
As I see life from a different point of view
Ecstasy is like a drug to me
As it sets my mind and soul free

Termination
Explosions and chaos rage from within
Termination
And soon the world will come to an end

Termination!

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A dark, sinister, and malevolent poem by yours truly.


Tue Jul 17, 2007 4:37 am
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Brand new from my mind...

Back 2 Back
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Somehow you ain't seeing
From my point of view
You aren't really believing
That I'm trying to get through

Back 2 Back
You don't know jack
Back 2 Back
White or black

Sometimes I wonder why I try
It seems useless anyway
I always seem to be left to ask why
But all you want to do is play

Back 2 Back
I'm trying to get my life on track
Back 2 Back
But I seem to have a lack

Of confidence

So I'm Back 2 Back!

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Influenced from "Battle: Casino Area" from Sonic Heroes and "Back 2 Back" from Sonic Riders. Here is a kinda fun, experimental poem that generally would do good as a song.

I hope you enjoy it. I sure had fun writing it up. :)


Tue Jul 17, 2007 2:01 pm
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A positive poem by me...

Happiness
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The sun shines down on me
And I feel so carefree
And I watch a pair of birds fly
Up into the bright blue sky

I am infused with happiness
And the day can't be missed

I greet everyone with a smile
Because after awhile
We want to unwind
After such an exhilerating ride

I am infused with happiness
I am filled with confidence

And a smile shines through
When I'm with you

And I'm infused with happiness!

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I don't write alot of positive poetry. So I felt like I wanted to write something from the heart. And I dedicate it to my dear friend, Persephone. This is for you.


Tue Jul 17, 2007 2:39 pm
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How sweet. It really does sound heartfelt. And I'm happy that I'm a positive enough influence on you. Remember to smile! Otherwise I'll come down there to personally plaster a smile onto your face!

But seriously...it's rather positive, a definite change from the usual poetry you write. ^^ Change is always good.

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Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:10 pm
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More positive goodness that I wish to share.

I Can't Stop
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No matter what I do
No matter what I say
How do I get through
To see the light of day

Because I can't stop
Till I reach the top
Because there is a future
That is awating me

I got to think positive
I got to be stronger
I just want to live
And I wanna be around a little bit longer

Because I can't stop
With a little hop
I will show the world
That I refuse to drop

Because I can't stop!
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Okay... it's weird. But I normally never write positive poems back to back or like 2-3 positives in a single day. Normally I take a whole lot longer to write up something positive, which is weird.

Anyway... it does have a peculiar rhyme scheme. Overall... it works. So please enjoy it.


Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:58 pm
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*groans*

Yet another positive one...

Counterattack
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The war is far from over
Be prepared to duck and cover
It seems like all hope is lost
But it's time we make a stand

So be prepared for our counterattack
We won't cut them no slack

We will fight for freedom
As we make a stand for peace
No time for a tantrum
We will make them beg for release

Are you ready for our counterattack?
Courage is not something we lack

We will prove that we are strong
In our counterattack!

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More positive goodness from yours truly.


Tue Jul 17, 2007 5:10 pm
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Meh... even more poetry...

Dangerous
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Maybe you should avoid me
Because you aren't gonna like
What you can't see
Something strange is coming over me

I'm dangerous
I can't be trusted
So what makes you think you can?
It'd be better off if you just ran

Darkness seems to sweep over me
Soon I'll be praying to be freed
I don't understand what is going on
Did I do something wrong?

I'm dangerous
I just wanted you to know
That my dark side will show
And now you should go

Because I'm dangerous
And it's not safe to be here.
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The first part of this poem was a tough one. Overall it's a pretty decent moody piece. Quite dark and evil and interesting all at once. Still not my best work. Oh well.


Tue Jul 17, 2007 11:34 pm
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More positive goodness straight from the soul...

Awaken
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The sun shines down on me
I feel a gentle breeze
As a bird chirps nearby
I attempt to touch the sky

Awaken
From a wonderful dream

The wind is like a gentle carress
It flows over my skin
I had a good rest
And now I'm ready to begin

Awaken
To a brighter day

And I look forward to the future
Awaken!

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I don't know where all this inspiration is coming from. And quite frankly... I can't stop. All my ideas are flowing out of me. And it's coming out of me as a poem.

Anyway... hope you enjoy it.


Wed Jul 18, 2007 1:44 am
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Not so happy...

In My Defiance
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I have no regrets
Of the things I done
There is nothing that I miss
And the battle seems won

In my defiance
I will take a stand
There will be no compromises
Nor will I need a hand

I don't need anybody
I am the only one I can trust
Soon you'll see a brand new me
And I'll finally be set free

In my defiance
You don't know me
Not that I care
It's too much for one to bare

In my defiance
I rely on no one
But me.
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Moody, dark... whathaveyou.

Read it and enjoy it.


Wed Jul 18, 2007 2:37 pm
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A slightly more upbeat poem...

Revelation
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I've had a revelation
That you were calling me
A heart warming sensation
Like I wanted to be free

As time passes on
We will move along
Through the infinite of space
It seems like a never-ending race

I've had a revelation
That someone was watching over me
And the vibe I feel
It seems so surreal

Soon the world is full of bliss
And it can't be missed
As my heart beats faster
Nothing will end in disaster

I've had a revelation
And it was you.
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Abit more positive. Not too sure, though. It does have bright overtones to a dark undertone which it may possess or not possess.

Read it and enjoy it.


Thu Jul 19, 2007 9:29 am
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Warrior
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I'm strong at heart
I will make a stand
It's time to begin
Are you ready to take my hand?

Donning my armor
And my sword
I pray to the lord
With the grace that I swore

Fighting for justice
And fighting for truth
I will make a name for me
It's time I break free

No more sadness
I will show a brand new strength
I will continue to go on
I will stay strong

I am a warrior.
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A brand new fighter is gonna step on Campus. Someone strong of heart and mind. Someone who will fight off all negative aspects and ill will wrought on by depressive thoughts.

The Warrior is me, Terasmus.

Please read and comment on this... I'd really appreciate some input.


Sat Jul 21, 2007 5:34 pm
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Plosive Attack
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Brow covered in sweat
You make a bet
That you will win the fight
With all of your might

It's a plosive attack
You got to get your life on track
Soon the battle will be won
Then it'll be time for fun

With your sword in hand
There will be no time for demands
As you prepare for the next
There won't be any time for rest

It's a plosive attack
A never ending fight
Back to back
Time to prove you are right

You are in a plosive attack.
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A new poem by me.


Sun Jul 22, 2007 3:54 pm
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This is a WHOLE lot longer than all my previous works. It's more or less a song I was trying to make. It does have a cacophony of rhymes here and there. And I tried to make it more or less as lyrical as I could.

Here it is...

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Don't Leave Me Behind
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You will know the truth
That I am lost
When I'm without you
Yes it's true

So don't ever turn your back
On me
Set your mind and your spirit
Free

Whatever happens seems to happen
For a reason
I should wear a smile
For awhile

Now I can tell
Even though I been lost
In a bottomless well
Of emotion

You have to know
Where I'm coming from
And you need to realize
That you shouldn't hide

Just promise me one thing
I'm gonna make it perfectly clear
It's just a simple solution
There is no need to fear

Just promise to not ever
Never leave me behind
Don't ever...
Leave me behind

Why do you turn your back to me?
Can't you see that you are hurting me?
You must understand
I need a helping hand

Because you are the one
Who's shown the strength
To help me carry on
I was able to move on

But now...
You decided to leave me
And thrown me away
And the day seems to fade

So please
Just hear me out
Don't ever...
Leave me behind.

Just...

Don't leave me behind.
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So what do you think? Yes, I know it's long.


Sun Jul 22, 2007 6:19 pm
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Another longer more song-like poem just ripped right out of me. I hope you enjoy it. I like to pretend I can sing this to an instrumental version of one of my fave J-POP songs called "Doberman" by Riyu Kosaka which is totally awesome. Anyway... here is the song-like poem.

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True
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I am gonna say it now
No matter the consequences
I will show you how
Even through our differences

I know how you feel
Even though it's sad
But it is very real
And I'm trying to make you glad

With so many things left to do
I hope to get through
To open up my eyes
And look into the blue sky

Soon we will see many things
And there will be many sights
This may be only the beginning
So get ready to take flight

It is true
That I am in love
With you
Because...

You are the one
To help me carry on
Shoving away the dark
And bringing back the light

It is true
That I found you
Holding onto my heart
I don't know where to start

It is true
That I do
Love you
Oh yes...

I love you.
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Leave a comment if you like. I'd really appreciate it.


Sun Jul 22, 2007 8:38 pm
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