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 Disobedience: A webcomic with tentacles 
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Post Disobedience: A webcomic with tentacles
http://disobedience.smackjeeves.com
A comic about girls, at an all-girl's boarding school, on an island inhabited by tentacle monsters? You don't say! I'm using Straps (with permission, of course, from her creator) and will be using Steel later on in the story, but that's the limit of the cross-existence continuity.

I'm trying to step up the pace of my updates, because one page a week just doesn't get us anywhere interesting fast enough. I scrapped the first pass at the prologue and chapter one because it read horribly thin in the archives. It's pretty much chatter right now, but there will be some lesbian smut in chapter two, honest. If you want the current story arc, start here.

So, please, enjoy the comic and let me know your thoughts on the thing :)

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Sat May 31, 2008 8:22 pm
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Post Re: Disobedience: A webcomic with tentacles
Looks good so far, but you must do more!

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Post Re: Disobedience: A webcomic with tentacles
I'm intrigued. And I know you can improve. =D>

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